(Archive) Advertising District / Workroom
- 03-December 10
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SSSammy Offline
make the roof a different colour from the walls, and you have a nice screen!
also, try putting some tables below where the tables are now, so it's multi story -
posix Offline
I think it looks pretty cool, but maybe a bit too grey and rusty. I suggest leaving a tile between path and wall. I think unless you build a long facade of buildings, for individual buildings like this, it's better to give them a bit more space of their own. -
BelgianGuy Offline
the path needs breaking up and do what sammy says it'll be better
Also idk if its possible but some stalls and tents wouldn't look too bad here in the path, I've seen monorail cars being used as pop-corn stalls so yeah you can definatly spice things up here. The thing that I find a little dissapointing and sorry for the word really is that your rides and coasters, flats and all show way more creativity than your archy and theming in general, I suggest not building archy because we say your screens need it but because you have a very clear idea of what theme you want to make with your archy,
To say this is actually you have the technical ability of the game down, now try to implement that skill with the same creativity as your ride designs and I think you'll have a winner for sure. -
pierrot Offline
I want to say so much thanks guys,
Really helpful advise
and...this is last pic ( workroom is still updated though )
Hope to see Design mark later -
Insanity Offline
This is sex, The supports are brilliant, as is the layout itself & a well built restaurant as well.
only thing i see that isn't quite right is the thickness of the path. p.s are you going to change the color of the flyer? -
SSSammy Offline
i started a LL flyer just before you posted that picture of yours! now there's a really high bar set for me, with this AND sws.
fml, i knew i should have done a B&M looper like everyone else! -
pierrot Offline
wowi started a LL flyer just before you posted that picture of yours!
Never, I love whiteare you going to change the color of the flyer?
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Liampie Offline
The coaster looks godly, but don't forget to add some foliage (trees and bushes) and some stuff on the paths like benches and lights. -
musicman Offline
Somehow that whole sequence going into the brakes loops awkward to me, as if you just go through the roll, drop back to ground level, and suddenly hit the brakes at full throttle. I'd personally put one more ground level helix before the brakes if this were my design. Of course, this isn't my design, and if everything on this site was, it would be a pretty boring website.
As with everyone else here, I can't help but admire your hacking skills, though your architecture seems a tad confusing/ugly to me. -
K0NG Offline
Only problem I'd have with this is if I were riding on the right side of the train through that last turn. I like my legs and prefer them to be in one piece. Otherwise, fantastic screen. -
Cocoa Offline
hey man, I hope this gets design too because it is really fucking epic, but I'm worried about the surroundings having no flow or quality themeing (except for the station). You should add some serious landscaping (like that actually affects how the ride and park work/look) and some nice foliage (I suggest looking at natelox, he is a master of foliage). With that you are sure to get design. -
posix Offline
Yes, the foliage and landscape design will be crucial to this. You've avoided it so far, whereas other people usually seem to do it first. I'm very curious. -
Turtle Offline
^I think he meant the landscape, which makes sense..
Although I personally make the rides and the landscape simultaneously. -
pierrot Offline
blah.. just want to show more pic , can't wait
i want to naming this area ' X - zone '
+ try to changing theme and I know path needs touch.
enjoy.
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