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  • Dyll%s's Photo
    Thanks for the feedback, guys. I will try to improve the 'sensemaking'. And what Cocoa says is true, I will build the structures behind the facades.
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    Thank you for watching! Criticism is always welcome.
  • rct2isboss%s's Photo
    The wild mouse fits perfectly there... The glass building seems a little off amd the supports on the wild mouse need footers. Other than that good job btw is the glass station supposed to be a station for something or what? Also the Catwalk on the last screen looks akward.
  • Dyll%s's Photo
    The glass building is supposed to be an office. I don't really understand what you mean with the catwalk, do you mean the black thing that goes over the path?
  • rct2isboss%s's Photo
    ^Yes the black path or whatever.
  • Dyll%s's Photo
    That is just scenery. It is supposed to to transport logs to the storage.
  • rct2isboss%s's Photo
    Oh it just seems a little akward to me but the rest is fine besides the stuff I said earlier.
  • chorkiel%s's Photo
    That first screen is just hideous.
    That be said, the rest is amazing !
    Some of your buildings are a bit (smal, ik kom ff niet op het engels :$).
    Other than that the theming seems rather flawless.
  • Luigi%s's Photo
    So....we have a floating office without walls closing the sides.....Weird as fuck.
    I just hate the supports in the second screen for some reason. The rest of the screen seems nice though.
    The third screen looks nice. I only think the glass window bottom-left does not fit in.
    In the last screen add some lights and bins too, instead of only benches. Not really a fan of the log-transport-thingy, but it's a nice screen otherwise.
  • Dyll%s's Photo
    The office is not floating, the black things are the supports for the building. It was a nice design when I drawed it on paper but it doesn't translate very well to rct2.
  • chorkiel%s's Photo
    ^I think luigi meant the back of the building doesn't have any ground underneath it.
    btw, keep the log transport ! it's awesome !

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