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- 31-March 10
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Austin55 Offline
Reminds a bit of fenrir, which is a great thing. The roof does seem pretty unsupported though.
Can't wait for more. -
Cena Offline
I like everything except for the grey edge on the wall next to the path. Make it the same color and I think it will look better. -
Midnight Aurora Offline
WAAAAAY too much of the grass object. Empty green ground IS grass, so you don't need to go over kill with the object. IT just makes the whole area look overgrown, which I would assume is not going to happen around the train ride there. -
Phantasia Offline
I agree with Midnight Aurora...maybe replace some of the grass bits with different types of bushes. That'd make it look a bit more natural for sure. -
jusmith Offline
I find it strange how the train track just cuts off the map like that. It looks like you just didn't have a good idea for that area besides foliage so you cut it out to try to make it more appealing... -
Midnight Aurora Offline
Really not what I'm saying at all. I'm suggesting he use blank space. Negative space can be just as effective as filled space, as it leads the eye to where you want it to be looking... like buildings or train tracks. Not every tile has to be filled with objects.I agree with Midnight Aurora...maybe replace some of the grass bits with different types of bushes. That'd make it look a bit more natural for sure.
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nin Offline
It does look similar... just needs white supports. Regardless its still pretty well made, though the tree diversity could be turned up a notch. -
Luketh Offline
I totally thought of Fenrir when I saw that. Awesome job! I think you missed a 1/4 brown wooden thing on that middle window on the building at the bottom, though.
That station looks outstanding, though. Wow! -
disneylandian192 Offline
It does look similar... just needs white supports. Regardless its still pretty well made, though the tree diversity could be turned up a notch.
I know the layout of the screen seems similar to Fenrir, but it really stops outside of that 8x8 grid (beyond sharing a common european style of theming). Fenrir was what originally inspired me to start this project. I had a design of a floorless coaster saved in the coaster designer, and I had been racking my brain for months as how to theme it. When I saw Fenrir, I was just awestruck by the details and beauty of the european style theming that I was just inspired to try my hand at something in a similar style. I haven't looked at the design since before I started the project, and I feel any similarities are in existence just because it plain looks good and it works. Ultimately, I feel all of the work in this project to still be original, and I'm really liking what it's turning out to be.
Thanks for all the comments all, I've put some more thought into the denseness of the scenery, and have made some adjustments which I think look better. -
Alpengeistfan1 Offline
The only thing I don't like is the sign in the top right. Other than that, really good job!
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