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+1 to what Steve said. The path blocks blend too much with the bottom left edge. I must be missing something, but why the different blocks there?

wow that's fantastic

Before:

After:

Much, much better!
Looking forward to this, is it almost done now?

i love love love love ........... i'm your fan.

how many times have you rebuild this park?

Fucking finish this already, holy shit.

You improved that area a lot! I cannot imagine how awesome the next version will be.

I can't wait for Starpointe 7.0 in 2017

Impressive screen, i hope you finish this soon.

you made the right call rebuilding that part but remember, half an artist's job is decided when they're finished

Nice avatar. Oh, and that screen isn't bad either.

Love the new version, particularly the chain link fence and the new Shoot-The-Rapids Station.

http://www.youtube.c...h?v=sdofUBR3SJc

Well, it's an improvement, but you don't have to fill everything with more shit. Some of that is way too busy.

I agree. Can't help myself but I again prefer the before.

DUDE PAC YOUR AVATAR, YES!

I love the area renovations but maybe in hindsight, it is a little busy. Maybe it's the foliage? Not enough negative space I think. Either way, great work as always, dude.

Indeed it's too busy. I think you're just overpowering everything with too much foliage. Just from this angle I'd say remove that tree next to the orange building, make those queue tents stand out less and probably the thing I like fewest/lesst (whatever word I'm looking for) is that your railroad has no room to breathe.

Qualitywise it has improved but quantitywise I'd say less could be more.

I acknowledge everyone's concern about how much I am redoing in this park. However, I believe that this will be the only Cedar Fair park that I ever build and I would just like to be pleased with the end result. I have pretty much redone the entire park yes, but I believe that the finished product will be much better than what was there.

As for the most recent screen, it may look a bit heavy on foliage. However, I really wanted to simulate the shadowing of trees that occurs in Frontier Trail/Town at Cedar Point. I appreciate all of the great feedback and criticism. Thank you everybody for being so patient for the submission, it will be released sometime this year. As I said, I just want to be proud of the park as a whole and not just certain sections.

That's exactly what I thought it looked like. Just like cedar points screamin swing. How far along are you now?