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The only thing I'd change is the thickness of the fountain wall. The thin brick works alright for the planter on the left, but I think a thicker (try just the 1/4 tile bricks) surround would work better for the fountain. Particularly with the decorative tile surrounding it. Otherwise...this is really looking good.

it looks like dorneys dude. nice job
-JDP

This

Try bringing the top of the roof up to meet with the top of the white fence.

and

Change the thickness of the fountain wall.

Awesome screen, again.

No, don't change the center roof part, you're going for a Cedar Fair look, and look at this:



Straight from Cedar Point, good eye for realism here.

Can we get a Starpointe coaster count man?

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I really like the queue line, or I assume it's a queue line. If not, it's still a pleasant stroll through the gardens given the openness of the area. The transition of the paths types is good too. Another great screen in an already beautiful park

Perhaps the foliage is a tad too repetitive and it needs some bins/benches/lights. Other than that it's a very nice screen, again.

Nice curves.

I dislike the path types... Brown sidewalks aren't working for me on a gray path, on the left the path is way too bare and it doesn't make sense how the brown sidewalk continues on the cray paving and then suddenly stops.

I almost want to say that the fence is too low for how close the coaster comes to the ground? I'm pretty sure I've seen low fences around ground hugging portions of coasters, so I'm thinking that's not a problem.

I do agree with Liam though, the brown sidewalk isn't working too well here, and overall, I think the area is a bit bare(due to all the tarmac and grass).

beautiful! i love the tree and the fences!

I cant wait to download this park!

Thanks for all of the input, I'll take all constructive criticism into consideration. The coaster count for Starpointe will be 8 including the Intamin "water coaster".

Orion
The Great Hunter

your foliage, while better than most people's really needs some work. it's nice, but it just doesn't fit. All the different types of trees on the left, it just feels too cluttered and off. other than that the screen is great.

I actually disagree, Gee. I think it looks very realisitic and unkept.
You might want to cover the path where it crosses under the supports. Otherwise, nothing wrong with it. Its great.

I love how often you update this! definitely my park to watch right now. and i like the foliage

Woah, the amount of updates is just incredible. Great update again and I like the foliage too.

Very nice screen, pacificoaster. I think geewhzz is right though, I don't like the combination of trees and the randomness of the grass.