(Archive) Advertising District / Starpointe

I'd say make the windows blue, the walls around the flowers grey (and with a little black trellis on top maybe) and make the flowers like an organized plan and not haphazard and you'll have a definite winner on your hands.

I love the interaction of the invert there, that really makes the screen for me.

I agree with colouring the windows blue. Grey looks nasty with the grey path. I really dont like that yellow fence. The shape, colours and style of the building look perfectly American. Good screen.

You're missing the classic car that's outside by the umbrellas.

That is some good work on the tower, and restaurant.

walls under that drive-in sign are too thin.

The placement of that immelmann <3

This is all looking very nice. Quite a bit of inspiration from Woodfall, I can tell. Is that a Wind Seeker tower I see?

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looks great!
Perfect seating area you've got here.
One problem I do see are the garbage cans kinda destroy the atmosphere, might use the original ones here.

^nah I like the cans.

great work yet again, one of my most anticipated parks

Best eating area right there.

I don't like the cans either. Great screen other than that.

Grey or green bins would look there. But pretty nice screen. it has some interesting foliage around the bench/table area.

nice screen

Can I post a suggestion for the last screen on the Previous page.
The path outside of the cafe should be different than the main street path, .pebble path or maybe brick path may suit the area

That is one hell of a screen, man. Excellent support work/color scheme on that Impulse. Love the little break at the end of the twist, as well. Nice realistic touch. Also, that water ride in the upper left looks very nice from what I can see. Great work on the planters around the seating area. I always find that fitting flowers into planters is one of the hardest things to do without it looking messy. It looks great here.

My only complaint is the same thing I had to say about Woodfall park when Sam was advertising. Even though you're clearly using a wide range of colors, something about the palette you're working with makes the overall atmosphere come off dull. Maybe it's the foliage being all dull brown and green. I can't quite put my finger on it. There's just something about a screen from Robbie or cp6 that comes off much more vibrant, even if both screens are similar content-wise. Either way, this whole project is really great and I can't wait to see it progress from here.

to start off, I thougt you meant info on the bacground you used not on why the coaster is named like that..
Because that background contains to thin walls.
other than that it's really good !

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