(Archive) Advertising District / Starpointe
- 16-February 10
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wheres_walto Offline
That looks really nice. Really the only thing you need to do is change the landscape because it looks flat and barren. -
Louis! Offline
Not sure about the placement of the corkscrew and the lead ins & lead outs. Hard to tell though without looking at the whole layout. -
Faas Offline
That looks good. I actually don't mind the bareness, cause a lot of coasters actually have bare land under them.
Good luck! -
Cocoa Offline
the track is sort of clunky, not smooth flowing, and i understand that coasters have bareness below but its not just flat, smooth grass. add some taller grass pieces and maybe gravel or something. -
JDP Offline
^Yes.
Those turning transitions are way too sharp and that coaster seems to have an awful looking flow to it. It over all is quite boring and that catwalk looks effortless.
-JDP -
CedarPoint6 Offline
I think it looks fantastic. Really liking what I see of the coaster so far; feels a lot like Talon. I'd add some bushes and grasses underneath the coaster, but as for the coaster itself, I don't have many complaints. Keep it up! -
Howl Offline
I think this is very good for a start, keep up with the good work and waiting to see more! -
Liampie Offline
The only thing I don't like are the 180 degree turn after(/before?) the corkscrew and the bareness of the grass. -
Pacificoaster Online
Take time to understand :
I lost my previous work for Estrella Mountain Park, however my new project i am working on will now be updated through this thread. Sorry for the forum inconvenience.
UPDATE:
I have removed the flat ride and replaced it with something special.
Enjoy and feel free to leave feedback -
Chocotopian Offline
I love the fences round the individual trees - simple elegance. However, I'm not too sure about the path from the ride exit. It looks too heavy to be supported by those thin stone pillars. -
zburns999 Offline
http://forums.nedesi...w...c=20638&hl=
Read the sixth post down to learn how to get some nice dive machine trains on there to replace the blocky benches you have now. Because, otherwise, this looks really fantastic. -
inVersed Offline
To be honest, it almost feels to baron and lifeless to be an amusement park. I am not saying that because there are no peeps either, but because everything feels very spaced out in respect to the paths. It just seems to be missing something, perhaps more structures, attractions, shops/stalls, idk.
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