Blaze Battle / Fisch vs Louis

Please post your battles here. After both are posted a poll will be added and they will be voted on for two days. Most votes after then wins, or if it is even it will be a tie.

Also remember:

- No posting until both battles are posted. Feedback can wait till after both are up and if it is posted before then it will be deleted.
- Battles must be between 15-20 lines long. No more, no less.
- Voting will start once both battles are posted.

Good luck.

so it's come down to this, pull up-a chair,
not used to this schizz, but hell i really don't care.
gon' give it a go, but this probably crap,
well i still stand a chance as you sure can't rap.
i got no style. rhymes. bounce. or flow,
least i admit it and yeah sure. my mum's a ho,
whatever you say i guess you always be right,
'cause i sure dont wanna come 'cross you in a fight,
what with all ya shite digs in previous rounds,
you need to stop playing, with all of them wangstas and clowns.
yeah i stole that line from the slim thug himself,
but you see i flip, reversed it. i'm quite proud of myself.
all those real lame comments in yo' other raps,
'bout how inVersed and kumba look up naked men and fap,
its just not gonna work on this homo here.
label me how you like, everyone knows that i'm queer.
so what you gonna do now that plan's out the window?
you got nothin' on me and my god awful flow
i guess you'll rag on my skills or the way that i post
who cares? i don't, i just play and don't boast
maybe my Head to Head parks are coming up next?
yup 3 losses, so what? i'm quite proud of those projects
so in your rap, there's not much left for you to say about me
'cause i've used my verse instead, quite clever really.
go back to your bowl or rather, my dish
i'm sure you'd be quite tasty, it's shame i hate fish.
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haha total lame, it probably doesn't work well for anyone but meh the way i read it it does, hopefully the punctuations helps with pauses and schizz. this was pretty fun actually.

hahaha, you're actually dissing yourself?
friends, this depressive shit needs some help!
though you committing suicide would be like a present
i'm kind, let me help you find your antidepressants
I don't think you understood what battles are for
you have to diss me and not call your mom a whore
that line was overused in the past anyway, brother
the line doesn't get better using it on your own mother
first I wondered how somebody like SSSammy wasn't replaced
now I see this, I gotta say you're even more of a disgrace
but I'd say we atleast have to give you some credit
you were honest about your verses, too bad you'll regret it
but no matter how big your lie would even be
it could never cover up that you're a weak mc
you predicted I'll make fun of your losses at HeadToHead?
sorry you are so unimportant I didn't know you were in that
i'm so important they made a game about me called fishville
just visit facebook to play it, i know you dumbass will
I'm not just BIG, label me the Notorious F.I.S.C.H
while I earn millions you get paid minimum wage


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Actually after thinking about it, I don't have a problem with his verses being 26 lines long. In my oppinion he can leave his verses like this! It would be stupid if he didn't because I answered to his now and if he posted something completely different than before that wouldn't be fair cuz then mine wouldn't make sense.

haha i dissed myself because dissing someone else comes up with lame digs so i thought I would turn it around a bit

Yeah, don't worry bout it. But take this as a suggestion for your next battles: Don't diss yourself lol! In a battle, whether it is a rap battle or any other kind of battle, all the different sides want to win. It doesn't help you to bring yourself down. Lets say we were at war...for a win in this war, would you kill yourself just so that the other side can't kill you anymore?

Close imo... both were not that strong. Louis' seemed more like a poem, a weird one two only you rhymed rap/crap, so I had to give Fisch my vote even if his lines were not working that well together. Nice to see we have 8 again... if any of them would post their raps we'd be good to go...

Fisch, I can't diss other people as it just comes out really lame so I just took what you normally rap about and did it in mine instead

And Kumba I don't really get the whole poem/rap business because surely when you look at lyrics to a rap they also look like a poem?

Oh and that 1 vote I have is from myself I just wanted to see the voting and everyone seems to vote for themself I enjoyed creating this lame shit though

I went with Louis. I thought his disses were more original, and his flow wasn't half bad, either.

I thought what Louis' was lame but Fisch responded in the worst possible way.

^That was the point. Lame FTW!

Does anyone else think that Louis' sounded like a Dr. Seuss poem, just without the made-up words?

Maybe it's just me, but I swear it had a Seuss-like vibe to it.