Blaze Battle / inVersed vs JDP

Please post your battles here. After both are posted a poll will be added and they will be voted on for two days. Most votes after then wins, or if it is even it will be a tie.

Also remember:

- No posting until both battles are posted. Feedback can wait till after both are up and if it is posted before then it will be deleted.
- Battles must be between 15-20 lines long. No more, no less.
- Voting will start once both battles are posted.

Good luck.

It's time for round 2, everybody watch as inVersed prevails
Already reeled in the fisch, and then ripped off his scales
Now observe your boy work around with his words
His nouns and his verbs that ground this kid from a town in the burbs
By burbs, I see your repping Allentown, the grand home of the objectiphiles
Rhymes that are embedded in your minds, so you'll never forget my styles
Speaking of style, your lyrics come slower than molasses
JDP, Just a Damn Poser, in this picture with the wannabe T-Pain glasses
You can say I can't uses images but don't get it twisted I don't play fair
My lyrics are more grimey than all the gel you use in your hair
In your battle against Dr. Dude, you provided zero good lines
How can you be a roller coaster perfectionist with zero designs?
Coasters, ladies, friends... are three things that your life lacks
I love when Hollister-wearing cats like you try flow with their white raps
Might as well count this as 2-0, and I've just started to get rolling
Forget the rap game, homie, you best stick with the game of bowling

my first match was wack but i found a solution
and an easy simple way to beat the "Revolution"
inverse that name is too common and damn to lame
your kind died for us in that war why they were still slaves
so read a history text to get your brain enhanced
so you can make something of yourself and not live off food stamps
now i see you wanna dig deep and try and get beef on me
thats funny when your myspace fan base is only 73
but just keep posting your music saying what you have to say
if you keep at it your flow might actually be good one day
and your getting at me for having no designs
when i never saw you on the front of ne compared to my 3 times
and bitch what the fuck is in blacklick ohio
i guess a bunch of fake black people who think they can freestyle
and yeah i use a lot of gel cause i look good so why care
dont get at me for that when yours looks like my pubic hair
and i love how you say ladies are lacking in my life
coming from a guy whos voice sounds like a 3 year old being chased by a knife
i aint gettin beat by a guy whos voice makes my ears ring
im gonna assassinate you like what happened to Martin Luther King

-JDP

Edited by JDP, 03 November 2009 - 11:07 PM.

lolz at the hair gel

Damn JDP, you really know who to lose a battle with your last line. That and the slave crack was a little too much. Liked the pubic hair line, but otherwise inVersed was just better.

Big improvement from week 1, JDP. I really liked the food stamp line and the pubic hair line. Good battle!

Lol @ the food stamp line, but your last line kinda failed.

InVersed was better by like.. a centimeter.

wow tough call. both were awesomes.

i dont know if it was just me but i felt alot of racism coming from the spray tanned white boy, and a myspace music reference week after kumba did it, can we not start biting this early?

inversed.

^I'm tan all year long with out going tanning. And im far from racist.
and when did kumba do a ms ref?
-JDP

Oh I went with inVersed. His was ever so slightly better.

inVersed. i love me some rhymes with dictionary skills.

Ok, I don't feel that it would be fair to point fingers at JDP, and call him a racist. Especially, after I racially attacked Fisch throughout my verse in week 1. I just think if its OK for me too attack fisch with harsh Nazi jokes it would be a double standard if we have a problem with JDP's black jokes. To be honest, we need to become a lot less sensitive than normal when we are talking Blaze Battles. I have been thinking of some potential disses for future battles, and honestly they cross the line much farther than JDP's black disses. I just hope people don't hold it against me for being too "mean" and offensive because that would defeat a key part of Blaze Battle

Come on guys! This is what battling is about! Disses...maybe not exactly racial disses but I gotta say I really didn't feel upset by what inVersed said and I'm sure he didn't feel upset by what JDP said either. That's how the game goes and whoever can't accept that should probably give up!

Edited by Fisch, 05 November 2009 - 12:04 AM.

^^&^Good shit guys, perfect way to put it.

Fucking 0-2... well what can I say, we got some pretty good poets on this site.
-JDP