Blaze Battle / inVersed vs Fisch

Please post your battles here. After both are posted a poll will be added and they will be voted on for two days. Most votes after then wins, or if it is even it will be a tie.

Good luck.

Hello, Fisch, I want to play a game
Die in vein, battling inVersed, the clinically insane
On the mic, I’m like your country in the forties, I slaughter
I leave you bouncing around like you got pulled out of water
Before you post your verse, bro, I got a few suggestions
Come to America, brush up with some sessions of English lessons
I'm gonna leave you lost like ET, trying to find home
Your outta your league with your weak bars you got from rhymezone
Its clear this guys a novice and not one of our best men
Lets be real, this blaze is burning him down like the city of Dresden
No I’m just messin, but I’m a legend, you know I’m back
In fact, I’m not leaving intact this Nazi cat that thinks he can rap
Whatever diss you try on me, leaves you inhaling Zyklon-B like one of your camps
This kid from the nineties is delivering like postage stamps
You’re a lost mister; I’m taken it easy that was merely a soft hit, sir
You blow like a small twister, shoot you in the head, call you Adolf Hitler
I've already won while your pathetic blaze battle career is already done,
Your a victim: Live or die, make your choice, for the games have just begun!

are you done, good, is this shit the best that you got?
after this battle with Fisch, you're gonna need a new job
all your lines sound wrong, like in theater rehearsals
so I'm asking myself, are these actually your real verses
are you only creative in rct? do you know what the real world is?
atleast you suck impressively, or are you sucking on purpose?
since you already suck, why don't you just give head to some cock
i don't give a fuck, that this battle leaves you searching for a doc
people laugh hard, cuz you're calling yourself a rapper
your verses don't sound smart, you sound exactly like a yapper
for the fact that you're black, I had expected more from your rap
now it sounds pretty whack, because of the lack of a good text
so i guess this is a joke, why do i even waste rhymes against you
you'll stay broke, I could even repeat the same lines and you'd lose
but no worries everybody, the king of rap is back again,
F to the ISCH, I spit by far more lines than microsoft paint,
rap is in my blood, i'm more gangster than an auto theft
before the champion takes off, better come and get an autograph

inVersed started strong then it just got weak and he kinda crossed the line with Holocaust disses, again. Fisch's just never seemed to go anywhere and left me waiting for a clever rhyme, which I never got. inVersed gets my vote thanks to his strong start.

lol sorry fisch, even though i like you, my votes gotta go to inversed on this one:p

maybe next time buddy:]

blaahhh. Inversed just because he had a few punchlines.

InVersed. Fisch's didn't flow at all at certain parts.

good battle! You had some lines that were really good!

Didn't expect that Fisch, but yeah Inverse.
-JDP

Yeah you too, Fisch. After that little line you used in the Blaze Battle thread, i did not expect anything on this level. Considering English is not your first language, i'm impressed. I liked your last two lines. Just work on some of your rhyming and you will be golden.

At Kumba, I don't think there is a line to cross in terms of rap battling. I remember last blaze battle season, years ago, I was criticized for using general disses so now I'm going for the personal attacks with the "nothing's safe" mentality. I get where your coming from when you say it started off strong in got weaker. It goes really down hill after line 12 because i start forcing the multiple word rhymes. My final line is admittedly awful, but i wanted to revisit the Saw theme that I used for the first line.

Next week will be better, but I still confess diss rapping is not my style.

Both were good, but InVersed his one was the better of the two Good job to both of you  

Yeah you too, Fisch. After that little line you used in the Blaze Battle thread, i did not expect anything on this level. Considering English is not your first language, i'm impressed. I liked your last two lines. Just work on some of your rhyming and you will be golden.

At Kumba, I don't think there is a line to cross in terms of rap battling. I remember last blaze battle season, years ago, I was criticized for using general disses so now I'm going for the personal attacks with the "nothing's safe" mentality. I get where your coming from when you say it started off strong in got weaker. It goes really down hill after line 12 because i start forcing the multiple word rhymes. My final line is admittedly awful, but i wanted to revisit the Saw theme that I used for the first line.

Next week will be better, but I still confess diss rapping is not my style.

Haha yeah think about doing a rap battle in whatever foreign language you're learning at school! Thanks for the kind words!


I don't have any problems with what you said by the way...rap is rap, battle is battle...there is no limitation for insults in this game haha.

Edited by Fisch, 30 October 2009 - 06:18 PM.

I hated inVersed but at least every line rhymed.

EDIT: Becuase I think he overplayed Nazi thing. Not becuase he's a bad rapper.

Edited by Dr_Dude, 30 October 2009 - 09:24 PM.

Wow, Fisch is geting owned.

iNvesed. Fisch's was shocking.