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I wasn't sure if I wanted to post this project on here or not since my level of skill has decreased because of a 2 month hiatus. But here it goes.



[font="Microsoft Sans Serif"]An excerpt from the journal of Henry Wells- [/font]

[font="Comic Sans MS"]9/7/2004- I'm the last one left. I knew he'd come after me last, considering I was the one causing his troubles. I don't have much time, but I'll explain myself. I'm Henry Wells, and me and 9 others have been trapped here for 16 days. The other 9 are gone though. They were tortured and then murdered by an insane man whom I know nothing about except his name, Johnny Faught. We have supposedly caused him all the troubles in his life and he is back for revenge. I... wait. I hear footsteps, but there's no one there. Maybe if I'm quiet enough he won't find~-.-=`'[/font]

[font="Microsoft Sans Serif"]An excerpt from the journal of Samantha (Sam) Van Stroner- [/font]

[font="Georgia"]9.2- I'm sorry about the stains of blood, my hands have been cut by the barbed-wire I had to hold onto to survive, thank the Lord that is passed. My love, my life, my all is dead. Johnny took him to a place called The Chair. The Chair isn't the torture device, but what it falls into, a giant spinning blade slicing anything in it's path. There are only five of us left. Hopefully we can get out alive.[/font]

Edited by ahank, 09 September 2009 - 02:29 PM.

Change the dive loop supports. Look at some here:
http://www.rcdb.com/3631.htm?p=0

Yeah the immelmann supports do need a bit of work. Be interesting to see how this is themed.

Good story Aaron

I fixed up the supports, although I'm not posting another picture of it at the moment because of more work I'm doing on that area.

[font="Microsoft Sans Serif"]An excerpt from the journal of Samantha (Sam) Van Stroner- [/font]

[font="Georgia"]8.29- Today might have been one of the most gruesome days of my life. Johnny took a fellow prisoner, Brendan, to the swampy lake outside the bars. Johnny slashed Brendan's face and chest with his knife. While Brendan screamed bloody murder, Johnny attached his ankle to the remains of Al and one of those old time prison balls and threw him into the lake, drowning him with his entire body in shreds. Meanwhile around here, things are looking bleak. The moss and mold from outside has started to cover our legs and infest our cuts and wounds. The air is a musty mix of the scent of blood and ashes. I don't know how much longer we can survive.[/font]

missing a footer bottom right

Ah, so your right. I'll fix that right away! Thanks for pointing that out!

The pond and waterfall are both aweful. What is the source of the waterfall? Why is the pond square and flush with the land? Put some care into both of those.

^Cash.
-JDP

I figured someone would bring that up. It's supposed to be a swampy area where the land and water sorta mix together. Your correct on the waterfall though, and I will put some more thought into that.

^Sir I believe you are the only person on this site (n00b wise) that doesn't get upset when someone criticizes their work. You got my respect.
-JDP

You know what, no! Don't take this shit! Be angry! It's your own damn work. Defend it!





JK

I echo their comments as well. Also, the hill in the first screen is begging for some smaller foliage, mainly dark shrubs. Looking forward to seeing some archy!

Even if it is a swamp, raise the water down one level.

^Sir I believe you are the only person on this site (n00b wise) that doesn't get upset when someone criticizes their work. You got my respect.
-JDP

Thank you! That what the reason I joined this site, to get criticism, not praise, and improve my work to become better.

I echo their comments as well. Also, the hill in the first screen is begging for some smaller foliage, mainly dark shrubs. Looking forward to seeing some archy!

I was thinking the same thing when I posted that picture. I'll work on that!

Even if it is a swamp, raise the water down one level.

Can do!

Good work, but change the support and will have a pretty realistic coaster.

^If by change the supports you mean change the rest of the supports, I plan on it. The supports are mostly finished and work has started on the station.

Not a huge update, but the next update should include some archy.



[font="Microsoft Sans Serif"]An excerpt from the journal of Henry Wells- [/font]

[font="Comic Sans MS"]9/2/2004- He took two of the girls to The Peak today, Sam and Tiffany. Sam was the only one who came back. I noticed her hands and arms were bleeding profusely. I unfortunately had to tell her the bad news that Caleb was dead after he was drowned by Johnny. As Sam was sobbing and writing in her journal, she told us what had happened. Johnny had tied Tiffany's neck in barbed wire. Johnny told Sam that the only way she could survive was if she could hold Tiffany over the edge of the cliff for at least 5 seconds (remember that Tiffany was the slightly larger one). Sam completed the task, but Tiffany suffered a horrible death. What kind of evil human could do this? More importantly, why?[/font]

Edited by ahank, 09 September 2009 - 02:43 PM.

I like how the story links to the dive machine with the holding over the edge and taken to the peak etc.

Plus I love the name Caleb so you get some love <3

^Thanks!

Note- The archy is obviously not done.



[font="Microsoft Sans Serif"]An excerpt from the journal of Henry Wells- [/font]

[font="Comic Sans MS"]8/23/2004- Everything is spinning. I'm still very dizzy from being poisoned and drugged. My hands seem to be locked to the wall by prison chains. The person who brought us here certainly chose a good location it seems. I think it's the old military encampment about five miles outside of Goshen. There's moss and mold everywhere in this room. The room smells of a mix of asbestos and formaldehyde. Definitely not a safe place to be. It seems the person who has imprisoned us is walking in, so I should probably-./,'"~[/font]

Edited by ahank, 10 September 2009 - 02:27 PM.

Wow, never saw those vines work out so well! Good job.

Edited by Pudding, 10 September 2009 - 02:29 PM.