(Archive) Advertising District / Unamed African Park
- 30-July 09
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Six Frags Offline
Well, it actually already looks quite good! You seem to have a taste for flow and path lay-out.. Very good.. Not too cramped, nicely spaced, some realism in there, good color-scheme.. You have a lot of potential I think.
If I can give you one advise to improve it would be theming I think, because at the moment it doesn't really remind me of anything African.. Just do a Google search and you'll see what I mean..
Good luck, and looking forward to seeing more of your work!
SF
ps; Oh, and welcome to NE -
Cocoa Offline
That's pretty good actually. It reminds me of some of Steve's work like Malaria (that was steve, right? well it reminds me of that) -
MF72 Offline
Looks good, but Frags said, there's nothing there that reminds me of Africa. But it's still good. -
JaminS_parks Offline
Yeah the screens I added are really a jungle area of the park (the coaster is called King, meaning king of the jungle). I am basically at a point where I could fallow through with the african theme or change it to a theme that perhaps flows better. I have not decided which path I am going to chose but I eventually will make a decision. -
inVersed Offline
This is a great start, shows some real potential. With time this guy is gonna be incredible -
FullMetal Offline
Impressive.
The architecture doesn't really feel African, but the colors sure do!
Also, props for doing a Ghost Rider inspired turnaround over the lift! -
JaminS_parks Offline
FullMetal I think you got it. I focused too much on the colors instead of actually thinking about how to make architecture look "African". Well anyways, heres what I will be working on for the next while. The pictures aren't quite as finished as the previous ones. The green coaster is supposed to be a floreless version of Nemesis @ Alton Towers.
screen 4
screen 5
screen 6 -
tracidEdge Offline
I don't think nemesis works very well as anything other than an invert. It's always real low to the ground so it constantly feels like your feet are going to be chopped off. It's just not the same if there's a track between you and the ground the whole time.
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