(Archive) Place-To-Release-Your-Parks Land / Le Tonnerre v1.2

I had a logo, but it didn't turn out too great...

Anyway, without further ado, I present to you Le Tonnerre! It received a score of 12.54, and the required score is 13.00. So close, but yet so far away.

If you have any problems with the link, please let me know! I decided to use Kumba's little page to store the file, but I'm not entirely sure that will work.

Enjoy!

BTW, the zip includes a translation guide in case you don't speak French.

you have improved so much since you joined. good work.

i looked at this earlier and i liked it.
i'd say just keeping working to refine your style.
idk, good job though. i really liked the coaster.

There were only two things that I didn't like.

1) all the trees were the same color

2) all the buildings were the same stile

Other then that i though it was great, you're really getting better.

Thanks for the comments, guys.

The buildings are all the same because I wanted to stick to a cohesive theme, but I suppose mixing them up a bit would be better in the long run.

I'm glad you all liked the coaster. I'm almost positive that the coaster was enough to win a design, but the theming held it back.

It was a very close call, next time I'm sure you'll get it.

Wow. I am actually really shocked Fullmetal. You have gotten so much better at this game man.

One thing I am happy about though is that not every half decent design gets design on this site. But I will say that your design seemed to be a lot better then a few of them that have made the front of NE lately. And no offense, even though you new name is Fullmetal, people still see you as Xin which could have dropped some of the voting points (sorry to sound harsh, but I am sure I am not the only one who thinks that).

Keep at it though bud.
-JDP

Wow, JDP, that's the nicest thing I've ever heard you say to anyone, let alone me. Thanks!

even though you new name is Fullmetal, people still see you as Xin which could have dropped some of the voting points

the panel-versions we post up for voting are all made anonymous.

^So the voters have no idea whos designs they are judging when they are judging?
-JDP

No, but I figured that I advertised it enough so that people would know who it was.

The only things that aren't so great about this design imo would be the fact that every single roof is the same (color even) as well as the color/texture of the buildings themselves. I also think you overused the window with the shutters. Good luck with your next design, this one was really good overall.
Another thing, I think you should try to remember that the reason the colorable trees are preferred currently is that they can offer some variation color-wise to landscapes. Take advantage of that!

-disneylhand

^ Glad you liked it!

Again, thanks for the comments, everyone!

Ahh 12.54 out of 13.00- that sucks.

I enjoyed it, nice work.

I really liked this, you did a great job. The landscape was done well, and you added just the right amount of structures scattered around to make it believable.

I can only see 1 thing that rubbed me the wrong way, the coaster stopping at the top of the lift. Other than that, this design was just great!

Wow, I'm still getting comments.

Thanks, guys!

^Yeah, cause the woody is great man!

Woooooooh! The new addition is finished! Download it now!

Le Tonnerre v1.2

Here's an overview of the new Le Tonnerre addition.


This blank spot...


...is now occupied by Le Parapluie de Roi (The King's Umbrella).


Le Tonnerre itself lacked an important feature...


...so we added on-ride photos. (Download the file and see if you can find the black camera! First person to post a picture of the camera gets a sneak peak at the stand-alone water ride!)


We had to splurge a little on land but...


...the new coaster turned out great!

Personally I would've chosen more o a subtle color for the Intamin, something more rustic like an orange or yellow, but it still looks pretty good. I'll check it out later tonight.

I still think you should've changed the color of the scrambler