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Hi this is my first thread on this forum so plz don't be too harsh on me because I'm not ready on the high level most people here are but I'm doing my best to learn

The park actually has no real name but its the name of the big coaster of the park CHAOS wich is a B&M stand-up coaster

there is also a Dive-Machine called Apocalypse located in the park

here are some screens

The logo for CHAOS













please give comments and let me know what you think

-Stijn-

Once again welcome to NE

These screens shows some good promise. One major point is on the black and orange coaster one of the supports goes directly through the track on the helix. (that would hurt )

Otherwise its all nice and crisp. A little more detail on the buildings (as they are a bit blocky right now) wouldn't hurt but its a good start.

Your from TPR aren't you?

The screens look good but maybe try and lower the footer height on the coastters loop (i never have any more then 3)

I've taken your advice on the loop and raised the land a bit so it would fit better for the supports



Hope this is better

Indeed. a good improvement.

I don't understand how the white supports would allow the body to swing as there's two of them on each side.

-disneylhand

^maybe the ride bit is when it tears itself down.

Welcome to the site.

How do you suggest to solve the problem of the frisbee, just make it one thick connector?

welcome!

I rather enjoy the first two screens, and it looks like you have a pretty good grasp of buildings and particularly foliage. good stuff!

How do you suggest to solve the problem of the frisbee, just make it one thick connector?

yeah

Are you going to put anything next to the frisbee in the those two big empty spaces? It looks kind of freaky right now with nothing there.

The supports on the loop are pretty cool, the way they're at an angle.

I think the footers should be all gray.
Other then that it looks like you know what you're doing.

Welcome to the forums. So far what you have looks pretty nice. The one thing I would suggest is too add some shudders too the windows as they're looking a little dull too me.

Hi again and work has been progressing quite good,
I'll look into the empty land of the frisbee but I don't really know what to do with it right now, but I did fix the issue with it being unable to turn like someone mentioned before.

But this is what I did yesterday and I'm happy with how it turned out
I know its still the Dive machine but I haven't got enough of the stand-up thats worth showing for the moment so here is another SS of Apocalypse

The drop tunnel

A Dive Machine is more interesting to look at than Stand Up anyways

You need to work a little on your supporting, and some of them dont connect to the track.

But it looks like a nice layout. The tunnel looks good, but work on the foliage

The coaster looks really cool, but please fix your supports.

I love that little mountain. Agreed on the supports.

Here is some work I've done today and I'm very happy with how it turned out,
I fixed the issue with the frisbee,
made another custom flat and worked on some foliage overall

here's the progress










Thats all for today and I hope you guys like it.