(Archive) Advertising District / New LL solo by RCTCA
- 14-September 08
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spartan Offline
1st screen: the steeplechase track would make much better flags.
2nd: the two snow covered trees dont really fit in. -
][ntamin22 Offline
I agree that the flags need a looking at- the rest of the entrance looks good. Also agree about the snow-covered trees.
I believe the mystery tunnels are actually supposed to be post-ride photo booth things, in which case that's really cool. -
RCTCA Offline
Thanks everyone. And yes, they are ride photo booths. I'll post a new pic of those buildings, i redid them and they look a lot better.
Park progress: 35% =)
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Xcoaster Offline
The monitor I'm using at the moment isn't very good, so I can't be certain, but I'd like to say that I really like the composition of the entrance screen. -
darkfire Offline
I like the look of everything so far, especially the log flume. I look forward to seeing it in game as the coasters have always been the best parts of your other parks. -
Ride6 Offline
Thanks guys, as usual. =)
(both slightly unfinished)
NEW restaurant.
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*moving the screens over*
Nice to see you take a pass at full-blow station architecture. The overall building seems a bit short and the coaster track at the front looks a bit out of place. The colors make it stick out too much. The Virginia Reel track looks a bit out of place too, turn it 90 degrees and match it up with the roof peak and it'll look better. The tree selection, flower gardens, log flume, fencing, benches, lamps, etc create a "complete" atmosphere though... The path on the right looks a little over-wide, breaking it up with more of those classy gardens would be the stock approach. Could just be the angle though.
The lighthouse seems familiar from your earlier work, so I'd suggest trying to spruce it up somehow. Maybe add some kind of roof, or trackitecture "railing" around the light itself. Otherwise the screen is very tasteful and the way the coaster track rings the rock in the background looks very natural.
The atmosphere is more engrossing than ever, and that's what's really important. Keep it up.
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thorpedo Offline
i agree with ride6 about the coaster track at the front of the restaurant (the reverse whoa belly track) -- looks very out of place. the rest of the restaurant looks top notch, however: great work.
also, with the bobsled track under the log flume, it creates too many supports there; looks unnatural. maybe you can block them out and try to make something custom? just a suggestion, looks fine anyway.
i like the lighthouse but it IS a bit plain. vielleicht you could do something at the bottom as well instead of just plants.. an entrance or walkway or something perhaps? -
tracidEdge Offline
They're not bad. It's all so brown, though. It kind of gets old.
Also, on the station, instead of having that ride station over the exit there, maybe you could raise the land up and have it act as sort of a pillar that holds everything up. It looks kind of awkward as is.Edited by tracidEdge, 28 September 2008 - 12:13 PM.
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jusmith Offline
The first one- great, only thing I'd suggest is putting some sort of wall or fence around the wooden coaster roof, and the one slanted tile on the middle building is strange. Other than that, cute little atmosphere going, maybe just break up some of the straight lines in the path
The second one- good idea for the station, but the roof looks really heavy and bulky, maybe some extra supports would help? Also, if you raised parts or all of the middle row of station on the roof it may help to give it more dimension. -
Xcoaster Offline
Both are great. I really like that coaster station, because of it's overhanginess and openness.
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