(Archive) Advertising District / Small Park

instead of writing a page worth of the parks history,
its basicly a small family owned amusment park.

anywase.

well i've posted a screen in the A.D.
and ive got 1 more screens to show ya.


posted in the A.D.


[screen unfinshed.]
and the ride ive was working on.

the park is about 30% completed

comments are helpful


=nokia

Edited by Nokia, 08 April 2008 - 03:30 PM.

I commented on the Country Kitchen in the Dump-Place already...
As for the second screen I think you need to add a couple different kinds of trees in there and make the ride a little bit more interesting. The station is nice, however fix the glitch for the entrance building.

thats not a glitch i haveta put a wall there yet.
i as i said its unfinshed

i like the first screen.
change the tables though.

Beautiful, I love it, please continue.

thanks for the advice

well heres some pics of things i improved and added to the park.

i added a new grestuler coaster. [still under construction]


the cars ride got new landscapeing


and some more buldings have been added on in the main sqaure section of the park.


comments make me happy

=nokia

Edited by Nokia, 10 April 2008 - 02:28 PM.

I love it.
It's so quaint.

The only things I dislike is the green building in the last screen. Make at least the doors blue, not everything needs to be green.
Also, the foliage surrounding the permiter of the cars should be thicker and more dense, but the ones in the actual ride are fine.

BUMP

well anywase.
just fooled around with this after school. still under construction

[this ride costs...$10]

i think there will only be like one more update intill this baby's realsed.

what do you think it will get if i send it in?


=nokia

Edited by Nokia, 12 May 2008 - 04:38 PM.

Looks interesting...
But I think the colours aren`t well opted.

Colors actually look okay to me, but that is a maze of supports.

^thats what i love about it.

depends on the size, but probably runner up

^What?

Anyway, get rid of the cross beams in the supports.
Other then that there's not really much to see.

if it's too small, there's not enough for a runner up, it would make cc or get rejected.

Oh my bad I didn't see he asked what we thought it would get.