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  • Louis!%s's Photo
    BEFORE POST EDIT:

    W.O.A.H -- 23%
    Olde Towne -- 50%
    Lost Kingdom -- 20%
    Unshown -- 10%
    Unshown -- 1%
    Unshown -- 1%


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    Area names subject to change. Nice and/or constructive comments/criticisms please.

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    AFTER POST EDIT:

    I have changed W.O.A.H for the better. After Levis' comment I saw sense and realised that this wasn't my usual building style. None of it felt right during building it so I scrapped it.
    Thanks for the comments regarding the pictures above, I didn't delete it so that you could see what the comments below actually refer to.
    Anyways...

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    Teaser.

    Edited by Pineapple, 26 September 2007 - 10:05 AM.

  • Grand Admiral%s's Photo
    If this is the Oldtown section you mentioned, then I feel really bad for you. Lost Kingdom as well. You need to definently include much more to all these areas.
  • zodiac%s's Photo
    I'm gonna guess this is very unfinished? VERY unfinished?

    Well, what's there isn't bad, but it could use some refinement.
  • Untitled-44%s's Photo
    nice to see people are still bulding togo death machines.
  • Comet%s's Photo
    There is something about the first screen I really like, do get rid of some of the vending machines though.
  • Domino%s's Photo
    ^It's reminiscent of RCT1?

    Like others have said, it could use more work. Even though it would look good in RCT1, doesn't necessarily mean that the same applies in RCT2. I mean, we have a whole slew of objects to work with now, so don't let them go to waste. Vary things a little, such as adding different textured walls and roofs to the buildings. Shape them differently too.

    Otherwise, you have a nice atmosphere going, very nostalgic. :happy:
  • Levis%s's Photo
    this doesn't look like your building style ....
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    Also posted in first post.

    I have changed W.O.A.H for the better. After Levis' comment I saw sense and realised that this wasn't my usual building style. None of it felt right during building it so I scrapped it.
    Thanks for the comments regarding the pictures above, I didn't delete it so that you could see what the comments below actually refer to.
    Anyways...

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    Teaser.
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    teaser one is rather blocky.. it seems rather uneventful for an entrance.
  • Comet%s's Photo
    Get some turn-styles in there, but I like the simplicity of it all.
    The interaction with the water is a fairly nice touch too.
  • Grand Admiral%s's Photo
    There's nothing much to show for the teaser you have at all. That structure could use a lot more detail to it. As Comet mentioned, turn-styles would work much better with it. Change up the rooves a bit too, there's too much unison which makes it very bland. Actually showing more than a park gate would work too...
  • Louis!%s's Photo
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    Dome.

    Edited by Pineapple, 26 September 2007 - 10:02 AM.

  • RCTNW%s's Photo
    Not sure what you are going for here as it appears to be unfinished (along with most of your other SS’s). I would change a few things

    1 – Get rid of the white roof. Black or gray but never white (unless it can be seen by the peeps and even then only to serve a purpose)
    2 – Replace the dirt tunnels with brick or something. The dirt land face is very tacky in this application.
    3 – what is the dome for (also, how is it a dome with a flat roof?)

    In short, if we don’t understand the concept, we can’t help you with advice on unfinished SS’s.

    James - rctnw
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    Sorry. To clarify it isn't a dome, more of a circular building which the peeps enter after the entrance. It holds various shops/cafe's.

    Yes the screen is unfinished, I was just after advice on the building mainly.
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    it would be better as a dome.
  • Comet%s's Photo
    Oh, so it's kinda like the thing at Thorpe Park?
    I think it'd look better if you got rid of the brown wall and made the sides all glass.

    It's a good idea though, and the roof would look better from a peeps perspective.

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