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BEFORE POST EDIT:

W.O.A.H -- 23%
Olde Towne -- 50%
Lost Kingdom -- 20%
Unshown -- 10%
Unshown -- 1%
Unshown -- 1%





Area names subject to change. Nice and/or constructive comments/criticisms please.

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AFTER POST EDIT:

I have changed W.O.A.H for the better. After Levis' comment I saw sense and realised that this wasn't my usual building style. None of it felt right during building it so I scrapped it.
Thanks for the comments regarding the pictures above, I didn't delete it so that you could see what the comments below actually refer to.
Anyways...


Teaser.

Edited by Pineapple, 26 September 2007 - 10:05 AM.

If this is the Oldtown section you mentioned, then I feel really bad for you. Lost Kingdom as well. You need to definently include much more to all these areas.

I'm gonna guess this is very unfinished? VERY unfinished?

Well, what's there isn't bad, but it could use some refinement.

nice to see people are still bulding togo death machines.

There is something about the first screen I really like, do get rid of some of the vending machines though.

^It's reminiscent of RCT1?

Like others have said, it could use more work. Even though it would look good in RCT1, doesn't necessarily mean that the same applies in RCT2. I mean, we have a whole slew of objects to work with now, so don't let them go to waste. Vary things a little, such as adding different textured walls and roofs to the buildings. Shape them differently too.

Otherwise, you have a nice atmosphere going, very nostalgic.

this doesn't look like your building style ....

Also posted in first post.

I have changed W.O.A.H for the better. After Levis' comment I saw sense and realised that this wasn't my usual building style. None of it felt right during building it so I scrapped it.
Thanks for the comments regarding the pictures above, I didn't delete it so that you could see what the comments below actually refer to.
Anyways...


Teaser.

teaser one is rather blocky.. it seems rather uneventful for an entrance.

Get some turn-styles in there, but I like the simplicity of it all.
The interaction with the water is a fairly nice touch too.

There's nothing much to show for the teaser you have at all. That structure could use a lot more detail to it. As Comet mentioned, turn-styles would work much better with it. Change up the rooves a bit too, there's too much unison which makes it very bland. Actually showing more than a park gate would work too...

Dome.

Edited by Pineapple, 26 September 2007 - 10:02 AM.

Not sure what you are going for here as it appears to be unfinished (along with most of your other SS’s). I would change a few things

1 – Get rid of the white roof. Black or gray but never white (unless it can be seen by the peeps and even then only to serve a purpose)
2 – Replace the dirt tunnels with brick or something. The dirt land face is very tacky in this application.
3 – what is the dome for (also, how is it a dome with a flat roof?)

In short, if we don’t understand the concept, we can’t help you with advice on unfinished SS’s.

James - rctnw

Sorry. To clarify it isn't a dome, more of a circular building which the peeps enter after the entrance. It holds various shops/cafe's.

Yes the screen is unfinished, I was just after advice on the building mainly.

it would be better as a dome.

Oh, so it's kinda like the thing at Thorpe Park?
I think it'd look better if you got rid of the brown wall and made the sides all glass.

It's a good idea though, and the roof would look better from a peeps perspective.