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Well im a new member here and ive been playing around at this park for a while now.
it desent i guess but i think its pretty good.




Thats is the coaster Rattlesnake. its kinda "jungleish". it took me about 3 days to bulid it and do all the plant work.



More of rattlesnake.



and the overview of itt.


Commtents/suggestions?

you've got the right idea with your buildings and ride details (supports, brake runs).. nice interaction with the path. The plants... mleh. If that's supposed to be a jungle, why does it look like a farm? use more natural, less uniform patterns in your foliage.

Yeah that's a pretty good start, but work on your foliage.

Improve your foliage and throw in some landscaping.

That really is promising .

I like the coaster , it´s colours and especially how it is interacting with the path.

For the junge-feel I would advise though to take out the juniper-trees - they are not very jungly-, and place some larger jungle-like trees to give a more authentic and overgrown jungle-atmosphere.

The density with which many other bushes are placed though, seems very good and fitted for this theme, although it might also pay off to place some of them in small clusters, like 2 or 3 of them together, and then a few that are not in clusters.
If you´ll place full-tile jungle-trees, there normally will be an unfilled space at the tile around them which does not add to the jungle-atmosphere. You can use a trainer though to still fill in that space with bushes. (if you don´t know how to use a trainer for that, many people here will be willing to explain).

Emergo

Thanks for the feedback.


i've been changing some of the plants and stuff.
i added a new ride called anaconda [its a top spin]

as for the trees i added some jungle trees.
yes i know how to use 8-cars, but i dont know how to merge tracks.


more comming soon.

there's an ask the experts section a few inches down from the ad district i think could help you with merging.

i looked at them and they werent vary helpful for me.
ive seen just about every thing on how to merge and nothings work.

It looks pretty good to me. seems like a good start

yeah im starting on this new coaster in the park.
its vertical drop
and since im not good with supports i was wondering if anybody would do them for me?
respond to this asap

^I could help you out if a better parkmaker support-wise doesn't offer as well. It would haved to be themed before you send it, though. This may not be the best way to go, though. The supports that you placed on the last coaster were pretty good; are you sure you're as bad as you are saying you are? You may want to try it yourself before passing it on for someone else to do.

-disneylhand

umm i tried and i have no idea what im doing i suck and b&m supports.

You'll never learn that way. Take a look at real B&M's and see what they do with their supports. Then open up 8cars, zero clearance, and away you go.

im trying to refrain from using hacks,
because just about everytime i do i mess up the trees and everything.
and then i have to replace all of them.

Edited by Untitled-44, 01 August 2007 - 12:22 PM.

^No you don't. Just click 'Restore' on your trainer. Everything will go back to normal.

-disneylhand

an impressive first park, it does lack hills and things though. and of course your foliage but everyone else has said that...

you need to quit being afraid of failure.

For a start, that is not bad at all!

Edited by Tornado6, 01 August 2007 - 11:08 PM.

Wellllll heres an update.

New Coaster its called accerlerator (prob spell worng)


and heres that b&m i was talking about but i think im getting rid of it.



comments // anything?

Edited by Untitled-44, 08 August 2007 - 08:36 PM.