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the new part looks too similar to the first part. I also think you should place some jagged rocks against that cliff face so it isn't so flat and boring

The water doesnt really look that realistic because you can't tell where it comes from. There is just a small bit of water on top that creates a huge waterfall. It would probably look better if the water came from a cave or another waterfall coming from off the side of the map. Also, the buildings look pretty good, but too much the same. It would probably look better if there were some two story buildings also and if they were a little bigger. Maybe scenery like potted plants or flowers would be cool on the balconies too. Also I think you need a coaster to make a design?

I think the landscaping looks way too artificial.

I think the landscaping looks way too artificial.

Insight +1.

Too much symmetry. Razor-sharp cliffs. No variation in land type.

Ugly.

-ACE

As much as I love hearing that my park is ugly, I'm working for myself.

But besides that, here's a screen of the entrance area so far. It will have mixed reactions, I'm sure.


Eh, it looks much better in game.

Edited by RaPiPo, 27 June 2007 - 09:19 AM.

too many arches, without support to connect them to the ground

Are there steps on the other side of that ledge to the left? I wouldnt really want to walk up there and just jump off the other side....
Just seems a little odd.

Didn't think about proportionality then?

But besides that, here's a screen of the entrance area so far. It will have mixed reactions, I'm sure.

I'm equally sure the reactions will not be mixed.

Interesting... but no.

I don't get what you're saying about the arches.

And yes, there are stairs on the other side.

What about proportionality?

What about proportionality?

Look at it all in terms of the sizes of the structures in comparison to the size of the steps. You wouldn't be walking up them, you'd be scaling them.

The Arches are not conected with the ground. You could fix that with 8 cars.

Oh, OK.

Yes a whole three posts! And with that sarcasm this fourth shall be the last.

I think I might stop this. I have other ideas and it's hard to work even for yourself when it's not that good.