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Dont worry, it isn't going to be another chain park.. D:

Does it matter? It looks the same.

Don't listen to Liam, he knows nothing.

Loopy, awesome work. I'm in love with the screen!

Coupon, I can't believe how good you are. The screen is perfectly put together and my only critique is the different paths in the screen. It's only because the screen is quite small I guess so it focuses on that, I'm sure in-game it wouldn't be a problem.

Coupon I think Liam has a bit of a point I'm afraid. I'd love to see you give a go at a full blown theme with rocks, imitation of foreign architecture and foliage, conceptual ideas in it, etc. You've been streamlining these somewhat dull and "typical" amusement parks fora while now but I think you're capable of a lot more.

Purely based on the building technique it looks great, but it clearly misses personality/atmosphere. I've seen too much of this pass the Nedesigns topics/database, there are so many great builders and parks that lack creative input. Looks like your challenge at the moment is originality rather than skill/technique.

yeah so try a theme park. amusement parks can suck it.

I agree with Liam, Posix and Ruben. This is good, but it also lacks any form of life and atmosphere. Of course you don't have to build what other want you to build when you don't want it yourself, but I think you're going to be amazed how much more fun it is to build something with an actual theme. Not necessarily fantasy, just a theme. You clearly have the technical talent, now show the creative talent.

Yeah its a good screen but I've seen it a thousand times before.

i suggest looking at say "chinese theme" or something on google images. ive been looking into theming myself recently. heres some stuff i found that i think is perfect to interpret in rct.

Yeah, great pictures!

Looks great Coupon!

Thoughts?

There's something about that screen that I like. 3x3 buildings are way too massive and undetailed compared to the rest of the screen, which is dense.

Thoughts as a parkname is already taken, by the way. Get your own.

I love it. An actual theme for a change. Nicely done.

I don't think the 3x3 buildings are too massive at all...the size is fine but, they're just a little bland. And, I sincerely doubt that anyone would steal "Thoughts" as a name for their park. Check yourself there, Liam

I really like the top half of the screen. The bottom isn't bad but rather monotonous.

I need some critique on this layout.

I like the idea of it Maybe have the loop straight after the dive loop, Make it more compact. Maybe instead of just showing a bare layout maybe incorporate it into an area and then you can change the layout about if you want to. Because looking at it now it looks awkward and i cant really picture it in a park.