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  • JDP%s's Photo
    i dont like the roof over the que but everything else looks pretty nice
    -JDP
  • nin%s's Photo
    Nice screen and tutorial Coupon ;)

    It does need more, though, as it looks just like everything you've ever made. Progress with your parkmaking.
  • Metropole%s's Photo
    Hm, some screens to comment on here.

    zburns: Wow. That is fantastic work. An excellent take on a batman theme, and not one that is the obvious choice. Looking forward to this one very much.

    Boss: That is the best work I've seen from you. Your coaster seems to serve purpose, which is nice. With the landscaping bit, work out what it is you want it to achieve, come up with a general shape for it rather than random jagged rocks so it has more flow, whilst stil being interesting.

    GigaG: Looks ok, the theming will make or break it.

    SuicideCars: Not a fan. There doesn't seem to be any direction other than having a large warehousy building with seemingly unrelated facades. Think of a purpose for you work.

    Coupon: Very impressive flat, agree with JDP on the queue cover. To overbearing. Also, lacks any life and atmosphere, something that seems to be your main problem.
  • Luigi%s's Photo
    The flatride is awesome. The queue covering should be lowered a few units and give it some other colors. I agree though with metro that is is a bit lifeless. Even the guests seem to have no life anymore :p
  • chorkiel%s's Photo
    ^I was about to say all of that XD

    coupon, maybe you can add some more peeps. it'll give it more life, some queue peeps and maybe some onride peeps.
  • disneylandian192%s's Photo
    A little bit of fooling around for something new.

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  • Liampie%s's Photo
    That's really good! I suggest making the wheels and all the related parts black and maybe make the gravel in the cars look more like a pile.

    What is this for? :)
  • posix%s's Photo
    amazing
  • Hex%s's Photo
    That's brilliant! :nod:
  • Cena%s's Photo
    Apart from the large scale, the details are spot-on :) Good screen.
  • Liampie%s's Photo
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    It's getting somewhere...
  • Phatage%s's Photo
    That train is really cool, but as Cena said, shame about the scale... unless it's meant to be theming only and not a real train. Or unless you create a whole park/area to that scale and not let peeps in, but it would be hard to include any real rides.

    On a related note, Foozy made really big peeps a while back to satirize that infamous 'hyper-detailed' park, too bad the image doesn't work any more though: http://www.nedesigns...h-1#entry168263
  • pierrot%s's Photo
    can't wait! LL?
  • chorkiel%s's Photo
    Liam, LL or Rct2 ?
  • turbin3%s's Photo
    LL.
  • Goliath123%s's Photo
    RCT3 perhaps Liam?
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    LL of course! pierrot, I can't wait either. :)
  • RRP%s's Photo
    Last progress screen before i finish this off. Mainly a screen for fullmetal :)

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  • tdub96%s's Photo
    Wow, that looks awesome so far RRP. Now if only you'd finish Southport...
  • Midnight Aurora%s's Photo
    There's a lot of great things in that pic, RRP, but I think my favourite is the bright purple highlight on the spine of the lift.

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