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Sorry nin, but the screen is not working for me. The supports are disorientating and the foliage is pretty bad as far as I can tell...

i love it.

I don't like the supports and i really dislike those grass landblocks. It's nothing compared to your usual awesome screens. I like the coaster and train colours though.

Very clean,

This is the problem. It's TOO clean.

I'm also guessing this is Steel Phantom style, which will be nice.

The path texture also seems off, the beige colour isn't really working, I also think the queue railings don't fit with the other graphics in the game, not exactly your fault, but I think there are better objects out there that would give you a better look.

Well this is the last time I'll be using the Kumba bench! many of the problems you guys say are what I've already been thinking of, mainly due to the object selection I have.

it's nice: but it's not Nin (it's to much Kumba

I agree now that I think about it..

All taken account of. This is the reason why I never do generic themes!

generic themes

Paradox!

I love it nin, reminds me of the Phantom.

I was gonna say too thick of a border, but then I thought- for a picnic area, this is perfect, it provides even more seating. But the plants don't look very good, the trees don't look right without any shrubbery and the two square gardens look pretty bad.

^ Area is pretty much unfinished, just wanted comments on the umbrella's. But other critique is as well appreciated, but keep in mind it's unfinished.

Looks unfinished to me.

I don't like the white walls right now, maybe they will look better in context though.

basically what walto said, but great job with the umbrellas! I'll be amazed if you could finish a whole park like that though.

Love the giant umbrellas, but I think maybe making the sides of the white walls gray will make them look better.

The umbrellas are really cool. The trees don't really work though. I'd suggest you use just one or two tree types + some shrubs

I don't even know

I liked what you did there, but you might want to add some foliage.
It seems a bit empty imho.