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i now that building underneath, universla studios??... i think the building need more detail,

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Sorry but it looks like your last park. Are you trolling us?

^ Of course not.

And this will be different, I'm also hoping to finish.

comments/criticism on the Layout please.

I think you have too many directional changes at the end and just before the second lift. For most suspenders, they end with a "bang," and from this look, it just seems like a forced attempt to make it longer. I like the first half, though.

Thanks I'll end up changing the end of the ride. The directional changes before the second lift is an unfinished lagoon fly over.

Also are the supports alright?

Perhaps, instead of that weird zigy-zag thing you could do somesort of a helix or such?

I'll teak it..

If anyone wants to help with this send me a PM. (especially foliage.)

All I can say is that weird Zig-Zag thing at the end has to go.

I really like it to be honest

For the most part, any time you start using multiple lift hills, you run into trouble...

The reason I chose Two lifts was because most swingers have multiple lifts. The exceptions being Flight Deck, and Eagle's Fortress.

^AND VORTEX
Honestly, I don't know how you can live with yourself...

You wouldn't be talking about the one up in that "Canada" place would you? Everyone knows that Canada doesn't exist.

No, no.
It's the Communist Republic of Canada up in the north and Jesusland to the south.

Screw Vortex they stole the name from us.

I like everything other than the bridge in the lower left corner, something in there doesn't fit the ingame graphics well.

I think it's a great screen but your foliage needs a bit more work. There is a few tree's repeated that don't seem right together and I think the foliage in the middle of the path could look better. Great screen otherwise and I love how you always produce great looking glass windows.