(Archive) Advertising District / Dump-Place

r_e - Thanks for the comment, I'll work on that.

Meanwhile,

Any comments??

That's really nice. Really nice indeed. I'd like to see that developed into a whole area.

Pineapple: That looks great. The only thnig is the wooden building in the left middle of the screen. It looks randome.

Me: (AKA Noob) My new mini. Has an Asian theme. Tell me what you think!

Warrior
Warrior
Warrior: I would love swinging over the water
Warrior
Warrior

-Noob

Edited by StormRunnerFan, 04 January 2008 - 03:28 PM.

Pineapple, you've imprved about 100% over the past couple of months.
I love all of your recent work, it's great.

Hey pineapple, once you start fully completing things in that park, you should make your own topic in the add dis. It'll be nice to see.
-JDP

Unfinished-Stage for Indiana Jones Stunt Spectacular

Interesting. The landscaping is sort of strange and crowded. And multicolored with sand, and rock, and dirt and dirt/grass, and leaf things, and bricks.

I like it a lot so far, but finish it.

Just trying to work on my buildings cause I know I stink at them. Most likely won't be a park. Hints/tips are much appreciated as long as they are not too rude because I already know I'm not as good as most here. Just try'in to get better.

Your colours are far too bright and aren't realistic.

^ Try telling that to Jkay.

Fuck things having to be 'realistic' all the time. The colours look fine.

Your colours are far too bright and aren't realistic.

Colours are always realistic.

Edited by Liampie, 05 January 2008 - 09:09 AM.

Colours are always realistic.

That's true. But I mean these aren't logical. You could better use other colours, it will look better.

changed the coaster type.comments?

B&M Flyers are painful on your back. That curve would kill.
The layout is OK, but you used the in-line twist way too much and you also used the medium-banked-up/down curve/hill way too much.

The first drop would be fun though.

Ok, so this one is the red one I showed a few pages back, the one now labeled 'Silhouette'.



And guess what? I'm gonna finish this one.

I would place some plants/trees/flowers on the grass on the
bottom of the screen. Also, use some other fence, in another
color, for the paths. And that black piece of land beneath the
station doesn't look nice...

I agree on all but the plants.

Yeah the foliage is fine as it is. I would just change the path and the fence.

Something I started yesterday. Entrance screens are what the dump place is for.





And another building

Edited by Camcorder22, 05 January 2008 - 09:49 PM.