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  • gir%s's Photo
    :drool: Not big into fantasy but Roomie, your work always wins me over.
  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    maybe you should stagger the barrels so that it sort of forms a round arch thing but the recent screen looks good.

    also beastly hack!! how the hell did you do that??
  • Fr3ak%s's Photo

    Is that the same train in the screen? :???: How the fuck did you do that? :???:



    Portals!
  • Cocoa%s's Photo
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    Here's some architecture from Howl's Moving Castle. That is the back of hat shop on the far left, fyi. A white clock face will go on the top part of the tower, some flowerpots and awnings over the doors on the blue building as well as more wood poles on the hat shop.

    This will probably be the only screen I'm gonna post, just wanted to show what I've been up to.
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Holy shit. So much atmosphere already...
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    That bright blue is awesome.
  • J K%s's Photo
    I'm calling it! Your best work ever. I just hope the castle matches the quality of the architecture.
  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    wow 3 replies in a minute? I'd call this a success. thanks guys. ^i think it should live up to it.
  • Levis%s's Photo
    so let me get this straight roomie. you will have teleporting. but not instand teleporting?

    I remember doing some research in the past with corrupt landtiles which moved and trying to get instand teleporting in that way.
  • posix%s's Photo
    cocoa, i think it looks wonderful, but i feel the buildings look a bit too crowded and thus slightly hectic. if they are meant to look that way, i would suggest to balance things with a bit more open path.
  • Roomie%s's Photo
    Hey levis. It is in fact instant. :)
  • ACEfanatic02%s's Photo
    Cocoa, the red flower box clashes horribly with the blue building. Otherwise, great work, if a bit busy.

    Roomie, we need a Pantheon, because you are clearly LL's deity.

    -ACE
  • Splitvision%s's Photo
    I love you cocoa.
  • In:Cities%s's Photo
    cocoa that looks absolutely brilliant.
    i'm mad jealous:]
  • JoeZia%s's Photo
    Some big stuff can come in small packages.. love the screen!
  • Xophe%s's Photo
    Yeah that's a great screen Cocoa. I love Miyazaki films so I'm intrigued to see how you pull it off!
  • Cena%s's Photo
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    I have a hard time liking this screen because it seems to be missing some things, I will explain why:

    Missing things:
    - Brown pole on the red side needs to be 2 clearences higher
    - Second red flower box on the blue building
    - Crown moulding piece in the corner where the roof of the blue building starts.
    - Grey stone block on other visible corner of the highest building (should be above the missing corner part).
    - A wall inside the blue building, now we see the rock surface of a raised land tile.

    And a glitch:
    - White water gritches with the green arch.

    Oh, and I would suggest you remove, the green/white awnings, it looks out of place at differnent heights + it's blocking the view from the inside of that yellow window. Better would be to make it the same as the other side with the yellow window and brown flower box.

    Next time, please take a few minutes extra time, to clean up some things before you post a screen, it makes such a bigger impact I think.
    However; the screen is already good, and I hope you can fix the things to make it perfect, you did improved a lot lately, good job
  • JoeZia%s's Photo
    The awnings would be better if connected at an angle, too bad there isn't an object already for that.
  • AvanineCommuter%s's Photo
    love the disclaimer at the end. also love the screen cocoa! Howl's Moving Castle is my favorite Miyazaki film!
  • RMM%s's Photo
    cena, why not just ask cocoa to upload the park for you?

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