(Archive) Advertising District / Dump-Place
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19-April 07
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Louis!
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The foliage seems weak, and the landscape a bit forced. I like the colours of the track & supports, I always have, but the train colours don't work.
Also the trains still don't fit with what you are going for. I know what you are trying to resemble, but it isnt working, the other trains work far better. -
ACEfanatic02
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+1.The foliage seems weak, and the landscape a bit forced.
There's too much of a height difference there for the bottom to be completely flat like that. Also, the cliff ends along a straight line with lots of right angles. Needs a more natural flow.
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Liampie
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I'm not keen on the foliage/landscaping either... It reminds me of this. And I don't like that.
Do you get the hint?
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Cena
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ohhhhoohhhohohoohohhhhhhhh he's back.
No he isn't yet back in California. He got a little help from me to get playing again. Although what I did what illegal (sorry Atari) it is for the benefit of us all.
@ Liam, major lolz. -
highroll3r
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why do people use jah's looping rollercoaster? the trains are shit. theres a massive gap between the cars it looks horrid. apart from that robbie the screen looks great. -
Cena
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I understand it perfectly, don't worry.
He's back can be interpreted at two ways;
Back at a place (example, his house in California)
or
Back at something that you are doing (example, Robbie building again).
See, that I understand it
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Wolfman
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I don't think it was so much a "correction". More like a "confirmation" as well as a different opinion. -
nin
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My thoughts exactly.The foliage seems weak, and the landscape a bit forced. I like the colours of the track & supports, I always have, but the train colours don't work.
Also the trains still don't fit with what you are going for. I know what you are trying to resemble, but it isnt working, the other trains work far better. -
AvanineCommuter
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I actually like the landscaping. It's unique and it reminds me of this:
, which is a good thing.
Not every hill has to be the same... aesthetically I think it looks great. The trains on the other hand, I agree that other colors would work better. -
verti
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It reminds you of terraced land? That's used to grow stuff like rice.. Which mean it's wet and soggy. Not a good idea to build a themepark on it
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RamSam12
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Robbie, that screen is fantastic. Looking forward to seeing more. Too bad there's not a better train to use for Behemoth style B&M trains. -
Austin55
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No, Keep the name, I'm just intrigued someone would make a park based on Texas haha. -
Wolfman
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The structure to the left HAS left me a bit confused. Is it a custom gate, or a private residence? A tip for the future: just crop out the part of the image you want to use. Don( blacken out a whole unbuilt area just to hint at a coaster. Just show the coaster -
Dotrobot
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It's actually a custom gate..
@austin55 of course.. It's where i live! And this way people can't kill me with landscape this and that.. Although Texas has an occasional tall hill now and then.. By the way.. Are you close to summer creek, fort worth? -
AvanineCommuter
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It reminds you of terraced land? That's used to grow stuff like rice.. Which mean it's wet and soggy. Not a good idea to build a themepark on it

Aesthetically, verti. Aesthetically. and you've seen Rangda before, no?
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