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That's pretty fucking good, Cena.

Only gripe I have is the windows; you're got like 5 different types with a different color for each, looks too random. But that's a minor thing.

Good work.

-ACE

Cena, color choices are good. but the mix of roof objects seems kinda odd. I'm not a big fan of that gray/white roof how it is. Also, your fountains on the left of the tracks is facing the wrong way.

EDIT: Is it really that hot in Europe that you can't be out for more than 30 minutes?

Edited by Dark_Horse, 01 July 2010 - 07:40 PM.

well, i like it.

its very very very good:]

now be nice and dont be a dick anymore

I really don't get that path down to that area. Does it just drop off and you have to jump down, or what?

Either way, I like it aside from the different kinds of windows.

Reverse the land types under the water. The darkest blue should be the deepest water.

get rid of the green brick deco pieces on the roof, they don't really serve any purpose. other than that, it's pretty good.

You have 5 different buildings in a 2X8 area. The 'fountains' are just destroying the wood they're spraying onto but the foliage looks ok.

I love it. Don't change a thing.

There's track every where... Would like to see more of that layout. Looks cool though man, nice work.
-JDP

Looks great - I love it.

Yeah that's awesome remy, I particularily like the grey stone slopes beneath the steep drops, really executed well.

It's good, but:
- the building looks totally random
- the splash looks out of place
- I think you can be more careful with your tree selection, I don't like it

Welcome back to the community again!

First thought it was turbine because of all the deco pieces at the roof.

^haha

So Cena...I think you hate these decopieces?

[quote name='Casimir' post='505434' date='Jul 2 2010, 02:05 AM']Is this some kind of Thunder Mountain? [/quote]

Inspired by Big Thunder Mountain from Disney Paris. 

 [quote name='ACEfanatic02' post='505441' date='Jul 2 2010, 02:41 AM']Only gripe I have is the windows; you're got like 5 different types with a different color for each, looks too random. But that's a minor thing.[/quote]

I will clean up the windows a bit, thanks for pointing out .

[quote name='Dark_Horse' post='505447' date='Jul 2 2010, 03:24 AM']Cena, color choices are good. but the mix of roof objects seems kinda odd. I'm not a big fan of that gray/white roof how it is. Also, your fountains on the left of the tracks is facing the wrong way.

EDIT: Is it really that hot in Europe that you can't be out for more than 30 minutes?[/quote]

Fountains are facing the correct way. I will see what I can do about the roofs, not sure if I am going to change it, but thanks for pointing it out. 


And yes, it is 37 / 38 degrees Celsius here atm, where normal summer temperature is around 30. Way too hot imo for this cold country normally. 

[quote name='In:Cities' post='505454' date='Jul 2 2010, 03:39 AM']now be nice and dont be a dick anymore[/quote]
Good idea! 

[quote name='MF72 ' post='505455' date='Jul 2 2010, 03:40 AM']I really don't get that path down to that area. Does it just drop off and you have to jump down, or what?[/quote]


First part of the stair is vertically up, but you can't see it that well. 



[quote name='Midnight Aurora' post='505463' date='Jul 2 2010, 03:57 AM']Reverse the land types under the water. The darkest blue should be the deepest water.[/quote]
It was more meant to be shade from the island that made the water look dark. I will take your opinion into account and I think I am going to change it. 

[quote name='Nokia' post='505487' date='Jul 2 2010, 06:47 AM']get rid of the green brick deco pieces on the roof, they don't really serve any purpose. other than that, it's pretty good.[/quote]


[quote name='K0NG' post='505498' date='Jul 2 2010, 09:07 AM']The 'fountains' are just destroying the wood they're spraying onto but the foliage looks ok.[/quote]

I like the foliage myself, but I can understand why you think it looks ok. It probably is because we use different types of foliage in our parks. It aren't fountains that are spraying water on the wood, it's supposed to be a splash section in the track. Just like the wooden splash segment the game originally has. 


[quote name='JDP' post='505503' date='Jul 2 2010, 10:07 AM']There's track every where... Would like to see more of that layout. Looks cool though man, nice work.
-JDP[/quote]
If you want I can send you a larger screen where you see more of the layout. 

[quote name='Splitvision' post='505507' date='Jul 2 2010, 10:26 AM']Yeah that's awesome remy, I particularily like the grey stone slopes beneath the steep drops, really executed well.[/quote]

*drop, the second one is a steep lift. 

[quote name='Liampie' post='505509' date='Jul 2 2010, 10:37 AM']It's good, but:
- the building looks totally random
- the splash looks out of place
- I think you can be more careful with your tree selection, I don't like it[/quote]

Splash is perfectly into place, buildings are supposed to look like this and I like the  foliage myself a lot, if you have more specific feedback on the foliage I could try to change it a bit, but since you aren't giving a lot of details I have no clue what you mean. 




Thanks for all the feedback guys  

Ok, I understand the splash zone thing now, but maybe trying hacking the wooden splash section to create a better effect.

Is this pathway far too overgrown with SHRUBBERY!? o:

It's slightly changed now

And also an entrance

Ok, I understand the splash zone thingt now, but maybe trying hacking the wooden splash section to create a better effect.

It would look ugly and I don't want that splash section in it, since it is a different trackstyle etc. 

Sorry, but it just doesn't look right the way you have it right now. The fountains just completely kill the effect IMO. But it's your park.


Not sure about the foliage on this...