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Just something I'm working on while trying to figure out what I want to do with Starbird.

@dark_horse - It looks a little boring after the immelman...maybe put a helix after the in-line twist? or right after the immelman leading up to the twist?

I haven't had much experience when it comes to custom supports, and supporting this element took me a while to figure out...what do you guys think?

i love the colors:]

Might want to add some support connectors at some places in the supports.

You should be able to put in another diagonal support so you dont need so many footers, but otherwise it looks great to me!.

New Project:

Maverix: Nice little screens. My only complaint is the exit of the tunnel in picture one. For some reason it just looks... odd. Besides that I really like it!

Heres something again:

I'm looking for some opinions on the layout


Thanks,
Storm

wow pacificoaster, beautiful. I really am enjoying your progression.

^ I presume you mean SRF's?

Dark Horse: You need something in the middle. I see you're trying to the diagonalish zero g roll, but in this case it doesn't really work. Too much high up track without much in between. You need to maybe consider helixes so that layout is more balanced and not too stretched in parts.

SGT: Maybe a little undersupported. Try adding some on the vertical sections.

Maverix: I'm a fan of that middle building on the bottom screen. Would really like to see more.

SRF: You need something on the end of it. Give it a helix or at least a water splash. Consider SheiKra that does a turnaround, splash, and helix or Griffon which has an airtime hill, splash, turnaround, another airtime hill, and a turn or two before the brakes. Nice job on the making it work with blocks. But I'd just really like you to finish something...

Storm: Layout could be better with a water splash section.

Maverix: Looks awesome. Can't wait for future updates.

Edited by Pacificoaster, 05 May 2010 - 12:52 AM.

^ I take it that's Universal Studios, I like the arch way but i'm not keen on the globe like that, if that's what it's intended to be.

Dark Horse the layout seems to spread out, and for an ivert with such large elements a longer layout is needed imo.

Dark Horse, the layout reminds me of Afterburn.

Pacificoaster, try using the 3D Cinema attraction for the globe, and try and suspend it over a fountain rather than gardens.
I'd also recommend sticking to one kind of path; having all of those there looks kind of hectic.

Thanks for the comments everyone. However, I enjoy the layout and am sticking with it. And Top Gun, that's where the inspiration came from

Really looking for help here. I'm not too happy with this area.

Everything seems like it lacks detail, and seems like you just threw this together without giving any thought about composition.

Thats a bit harsh. Id say theres thought there but only to a basic degree. Magmoormaster you should try and think more in depth regarding each item you place. Careful consideration is very important

You mean I actually have to think?

jk

I don't mind harsh though.

I'll just have to totally redo that section. Probably a good thing, its so different from the rest of the park...

"Though it's just a memory, some memorys last forever..."

PS: Ignore the LIIIITTLE bit of brown up there.