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the first screen looks interesting but i have no idea what it is. i would try to help you with ideas of how to make it look more like something but since there is no english i dont know what it is supposed to be.

the next screens are okay but could use some detail and some structural diversity.


FK

Best coaster station I saw for a while.

It's spelt Mahogony.

Not bad though.

Great station, Comet!
But the flat roof is a little bit to blank.
I would build a few deco-things on it...

I like to see more.

Here are two new screens from my park, maybe I will create a topic for it in the next time!
It is at the "Italian Job"-Coaster...



Entrance Area


Launch Area




I hope you like it!!!

Comet - get rid of the flat-planked roof and make the spanish tiled roof spread the building.

DelLagos - Nice work. The only thing I would change is the coaster track behind the logo. Make it look less random and more organised.

I think it's supposed to look random...

^Yeah but right now it looks to messy. The track is a bit too broken up.

Assuming that is scenery track and not some sort of stunt jump which actually might be pretty cool, it looks like there is a little too much track and it is too random. maybe one set of hills and a curve would be more organized. Other than that, the ride looks nice, good foliage and the parking structure is cool looking

Nice concept, just don't make it look too much like zburn's Italian Job.

Sorry about the missing deco blocks and the glitch

Oh and the plant on the roof

Edited by JJ, 23 October 2007 - 09:08 PM.

JJ that's nice. I like the barrels used as pillars and the glass on the building is great. It reminds me of some building I saw in Barcelona.

Been working on this park for a few good months now. Just a small screen:


Screen is unfinished near top.

Edited by Pineapple, 24 October 2007 - 04:40 AM.

Don't understand what those purple things are suppost to be ...

JJ, you're screen is very nice

@JJ:

Not sure about the windows on the large gable at the top right of the screen, cause there is nothing behind it; but I guess fake windows have been seen in themepark-theming before...

Also the vertical 1/16th tile colums at the lower left of the screen would look better as brick, or something else with more texture. Although I think brick and castle texture are the only textures that size block has been made in so far, not sure, maybe wood too. But brick would still look best there IMO.

Either way, JJ, you are showing constant improvement. Either that or I had no idea you were this good before

Edited by ride_exchanger, 24 October 2007 - 11:35 AM.

Very nice screen JJ!

The only thing that really ruins it for me is that crown moulding along that roof.
Imo that looks odd and misplaced here.
Does not have any "style-connection" with anything else, especially not with the green wooden roofs. So I would suggest to take a fence or small block that goes better with the wood to align that roof, or even just the simple straight art-deco piece.

Also think it would be very nice (for the unity) to place a green wooden roof on that exit-gate(?) from the whirler, where now is just that flat light brown block.

And what is that cannon doing there?
Does it have any relation to the theme....?

I also fully agree with R_E on the structure of the columns, and don't forget to align that fences, where one is standing on the other tile beacuse of the lamppost....

Otherwise....very nice work!

Emergo

JJ @ NIce restaurant, great work

Pineapple @ Good idea, butt i miss some details

Screen is unfinished near top.

Looks unfinished near the bottom too. It's actually a little confusing as a screen. lol

That bridge looks much better without the woodie track