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nokia, every path must be default?

no i just think it'll look better.

those bullrushes don't really work as flowers imo.

I would not mess with the structure at this point. Once the area is finished, it should blend in more. Until then it's like looking at the Monolisa without the background painted or any picture for that matter that is incomplete. I say, leave it as it is and then show is once the area is finished.

This is my first park ever and I am not using zero clearances.

Wow great screen, but the entrance are seems a little smushed. Cant wait to seem more of it.

Thanks G Force, the entrance is suppose to be a little smushed because I didnt want the entrance to take up a ton of space.

maybe add some planters with flowers or trees etc...
looks like a nice start..

Hey guys, just started work on my great park of mine. Here is the first ride I put in. Comments and Criticism are greatly asked for!


Here it is. Hope you enjoy it!




Only at SFM!

I'm telling you, finish more and everything will look so much better. Even if it's a small shot, it's going to look better than a half supported/themed layout. If you ever look at some of my screens you'll see that many are on a small-scale but that's because I just want to show the most finished areas of the subject.

I can tell by the drop that the pacing on that coaster is awful.

And look rob, you have a friend.
-JDP

And this just proves why Robbie's batman screen was nothing special. As to me, this is pretty much the same thing.
Don't get me wrong I love robbie's stuff, just I didn't see why that screen was considered so great when other people that don't have the same ability can do the same thing.

thats a teency weeency bit ignorant when you think about it, louis.

How? I'm actually complimenting both people here.

I'm saying that Panther's screen has the same qualities that robbie's had and I'm saying that robbie has the ability to be better than what he produced in his batman screen.

How is that being ignorant?

robbies screen had ALOT more content.

It may have had a lot more content but that doensn't make it special. In my opinion robbie's work is better than what he produced in that screen and that screen wasn't spectacular, that is all I have said and i'm entitled to my opinion.

Is that all you guys ever do around here now is bicker? Seriously, ya'll need to start acting more mature. Does anyone ever give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism anymore? THis is the Dmup Place, people use it to get feedback on unfinished stuff, and ocassionally (sp?) someone shows off some suberb idea they had. BTW, it's a game.

Panther, it's decent. Good path interaction, but work on the part from after the carousel curve to the ending, esp that part that supposed to be a 180 helix. IMO, the wooden coaster doesn't work as a catwalk, and that is my opinion. Try cropping out the toolbars in your screen. I know I said this was a place to get feedback from unfinished screens, but you either need to finish more overall, or take a screen of a finished portion, such as the station. Which right now, seem kinda blocky, but that may be because I an't see any details from that far out. Lastly, add some more foliage, and change the ground type...unless Batman is saving Mars.

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Is that all you guys ever do around here now is bicker? Seriously, ya'll need to start acting more mature. Does anyone ever give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism anymore? THis is the Dmup Place, people use it to get feedback on unfinished stuff, and ocassionally (sp?) someone shows off some suberb idea they had. BTW, it's a game.

Who on earth are you tell others what they can and cant do?
We are perfectly mature, probably more so than you and I think you'll find that pretty much everyone around here gives contructive criticism.

And for the record we werent bickering, me & sammy like each other, we were merely discussing each others opinions.

legleo - there is something missing to your screen. It's a lack of depth. The building is flat faced, and whilst texture does help with this you need to add a bit of detail too.

I think it looked better with the gold rather than the white that you've got now. And the blue awning things hide the arches which I really liked in the first version. The red flowers look better though. Be careful your structures don't get too repetitive...

Legleo, try to add something to let us know what that structure is.

Louis!, I never said you guys can't do whatever the hell you want, but currently you are annoying people. I know I am not the only one that feels this way too. You never even attempted to say how panther33 could improve, but whatever. I agree with Sammy that you have become ignorant lately.

EDIT: used full usernames before someone bitched at me for that. :-D

Edited by Dark_Horse, 08 January 2010 - 10:26 AM.