(Archive) Advertising District / Dump-Place
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19-April 07
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posix Offline
Cena, your screen is phenomenal. If you finish something of this detail and with a decent scale, you'll most likely establish yourself as the best Dutch parkmaker on NE.
Great to see that some panelists are apparently influenced by your name .... -
RRP Offline
Looks good cena, im not sure about the quarter crowns on the cinema.I think they'd look better if you achieved the same effect with a smaller object.From left to right: Cinema, Clothingstore, Souvenirshop.
- I will fix the glitch with the windows, didn't noticed it untill now.
The top (roof edge) would probably look better if you used more of a dull texture for the pink.Its a bit of a horrible colour when using the castle wall blocks.
The path outside would also look better as a red carpet rather than checker board and cut down the clash with the pavement.
Try and change the lower roof on the second building from the left to something other than brown (maybe grey/black) to stop it blending with the wall.
There is also a bit of a window overload on the buildings but im assuming thats just this screen,hopefully you've broken it up with some building with less windows elsewhere.
Remove the 2 tree planter as it makes the path to small there and makes it cluttered.
Love the ornamental tree on the single quarter tile grass,custom windows and the circular fence around the other tree.
As gee said the mud arch is really out of place. I really like the overgrown area in the bottom left next to the path. Rework the station its terrible at the minute.The wall texture you've used for it always makes me cringe,i consider it poor mans wood as it looks like a cheep wooden fence
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Six Frags Offline
Nokia, Nice atmosphere there man! Like the overgrown feel it has..
Maybe change the white on the queue railings though..
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J K Offline
Yeah why the hate for cena's screen its amazing!!! I for one have seen most of the park in rpogress and it has spotlight and parkmaker written all over it. I just can't wait for you to finish it because you know it will be amazing. -
Liampie Offline
Cena, your screen is phenomenal. If you finish something of this detail and with a decent scale, you'll most likely establish yourself as the best Dutch parkmaker on NE.
What's so phenomal about the screen? I mostly see forced detail and horrible colour schemes. -
Liampie Offline
I don't dislike that opinion, but I fail to understand how this screen looks better than any work by Emergo, tyandor, ivo, Sulakke or any of the other great Dutch parkmakers this site knows or had known. I don't think much thought went into this screen or any of his other screens, there are to many flaws that contradict that.
Quantity is a matter of time. -
posix Offline
what's phenomenal is that he manages to replicate real life in a very convincing manner and the details added all make a lot of sense to me. it makes the whole world he created there more believable, which is why i find it so awesome.
the only thing i could probably see myself disagree with is the white centrepiece on the balcony of the clothingstore. i can't relate it to something i've seen in real life before very well. therefore i suspect it to be a bit of a filler, but certainly not a very striking one. -
Cena Offline
Yeah why the hate for cena's screen its amazing!!! I for one have seen most of the park in rpogress and it has spotlight and parkmaker written all over it. I just can't wait for you to finish it because you know it will be amazing.
Thank you J K. I will show you some screens in the future again.
I want to thank Posix and Geewhzz and others too.
Work on DFS v2 is going quick atm, have nothing to do all day since I am sick atm, so playing RCT2 and R.U.S.E. Beta all day -
Fisch Offline
Thank you J K. I will show you some screens in the future again.Yeah why the hate for cena's screen its amazing!!! I for one have seen most of the park in rpogress and it has spotlight and parkmaker written all over it. I just can't wait for you to finish it because you know it will be amazing.
I want to thank Posix and Geewhzz and others too.
Work on DFS v2 is going quick atm, have nothing to do all day since I am sick atm, so playing RCT2 and R.U.S.E. Beta all day
I can't say i've seen all of it but what i've seen was:Edited by Fisch, 08 December 2009 - 12:47 PM.
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Comet Offline
That's great Nokia I love how you keep things simple
Hopefully when you're done you can get somebody to go through and help you with the entrance/exit huts
Or do it yourself if you know how to -
Nokia Offline
turbin3:kay.
comet: i know how to do it, i'll probably just be a lazy fuck and cover them up with arches or something.
and for the mud arches they'll be removed.
i agree with liam on cena's screen. -
J K Offline
Your foliage looks better. The structure looks interesting and even the tan path that shouldn't work blends well with the tan on the roof. That sir is a massive improvement. Just add some smaller details like park maps and such to take it that extra step further. Looking forward to seeing what you can do next. -
JDP Offline
Dude, don't use those wooden polls as parking spaces. Use the actual parking space scenery. Other then that listen to JK.
-JDP
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