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Frdalton, thats looking very promising so far., all i can say is try to post less in here, im unsure of what others think, but i find that when new members post constantly after everything they make it quickly becomes tiresome. i am all too happy to talk on AIM or MSN and give you constructive critisism and a way to go, and sometimes it is best to post in order to get what will look good, but constant posting can become annoying, even if it is with intent of improvement and sometimes, on rare occasions, it can become less your work and more others. trust your own judgement
if constant feedback is the way you feel you improve most rapidly, maybe your own topic will get you the most help.

Just messin' around. I'm unsure of what kind of rail to use on the retaining wall by the lake, though.

very nice indeed FM, some notes to improve on though...

i find the windows are a little overbarring, a little all consuming. i dont know how you could tackle this though. maybe its only me that thinks this.

the border around the foliage is very thick, more of a nucance than a help
if you could possibly thin that up that would be fantastic.

end of the day, that building feels abit grey. perhaps some interesting architectual details could liven the structure up abit.


looking forward to more


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Yeah, uh, Jag.. I don't know if you can call frdalton's layout bad, seeing as kiddie coasters are more often than not very simple in layout... and then there are your layouts.

I don't like the multicolored paths in that screen, or the way the pipe is so long (). And just 'cause the area is a sewage/icky theme doesn't mean you can't lighten it up and add some vibrant colors in there, look at how Xophe did it with Zippo's.

Full Metal, that's one of the best things I've seen come from you. It looks like a portion of a main street, so I hope you'll continue on some buildings, maybe to the right. Your tree border is indeed a bit wide, Id try and make it smaller. Otherwise, things are looking quite nice Good job with that.

Yeah, uh, Jag.. I don't know if you can call frdalton's layout bad, seeing as kiddie coasters are more often than not very simple in layout... and then there are your layouts.

I don't like the multicolored paths in that screen, or the way the pipe is so long (). And just 'cause the area is a sewage/icky theme doesn't mean you can't lighten it up and add some vibrant colors in there, look at how Xophe did it with Zippo's.

Yes, the layout sucks, but it isn't un-rideable. And the theme isn't sewage, its toxic waste, gosh! Everyone knows that.

well, speaking on behalf of myself, and basically every single person in the world, I/We did not know that the theme was Toxic Waste.

I was being sarcastic. Though I can't blame you for not telling that it was sarcsm by the text.

oh dang, i didnt even see your screen fullmetal.

thats probably the best thing i've seen from you.


i think its lacking in details though.
some signs and tiny little details on the building would make it even better, and break up the hard symmetry of it.
maybe even a small water feature, like a little fountain or something would enhance it as well.

either way, do what you like man.
this is a great start, and looks really nice so far:]

Thanks for the comments, guys. I'll definitely redo the retaining wall and the planter. Can't say as much for the building, though, although I see where you're coming from, Shammy.

Shammy is my name for SSSammy. Find your own bitch.

BAM

Jaguarkid140, I like how you have improved but the different paths just really don't go for me. I think you should definately add some shrubs and add some more colour to contradict that grey from the sign at the top. I know it's unfinished but there is still a vast amount to improve on.

Remove the glitch and add some benches, lamps etc, then it is a godly screen as far as I can judge  

the bottom-right part looks a little boring, but that structure is really good.

Looks familiar.

Cena: you know, i would do that, but its too late now
i forgot to post anything whilst i was building it.
thank you very, very much though.
Gwazi: ahhh, i knew i should have posted something whilst building... haha
thanks alot man.
JJ: so it should.

Good screen SSSammmy.

Here is a screen of a coaster layout. It is a little unfinished, but the landscaping is freaking awesome!!! It took me quite a while to complete.

hahahahaha
good one

Anyone in favor of jagged rocks, say ''aye!''

@SSSammy: I don't like the roof, the proportions don't look right: it's higher than it's wide.
@jaguar: 8 cars plz.