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Guess what I did last night?


Not gonna go anywhere with it, it's DUMP, but I'm pretty proud of my first custom flatride.

Edited by Luketh, 07 November 2009 - 08:55 AM.

The supports are fall too small. Imagine a beam holding that car out that far if it went down straight it would smash right in to the ground.

Oh... good point... supports need to be higher for frisbees...

I didn't even think about that, thanks JJ. Still got a lot to learn.

You spent your Friday night building that?

Another picture of Lunar Rocket

no

im sorry Jag, that has no asthetic value at all in my eyes.
its all really horrible.
id suggest something to improve it but you know, id hate to say "just start over"...

Jag it needs touches here and there to improve the consistency of the objects your using. My main crit however is if you like this do not change a thing. Its your work so make your own rules. Do not start this again from someones else's crit.

im sorry Jag, that has no asthetic value at all in my eyes.
its all really horrible.
id suggest something to improve it but you know, id hate to say "just start over"...

I'm sorry, but are you FUCKING high? Those supports look great. Coaster could use some work and things, but Jesus, stop being an ass.


Jaguarkid, I think you're showing great improvement. I like the idea of having a sci-fi themed wooden ride. Very interesting. That green round object is kind of out of place though, but I like the idea. Keep at it!

Steve, ignore SSSammy he is going through a phase where he believes he is actually intelligent.

Finally people agree with me that everything sam says is in his opinion correct!

SSSammy is a jackass.

i have two question:

1) What is that green thing?

2) Why is there a spaceship?

the rest is alright, i have to say.

Uhoh... I smell an opinion. Sound the alarm!

Steve, ignore SSSammy he is going through a phase where he believes he is actually intelligent.

Nah, I think that what I make is usually hit or miss.

i say ban him!

i have two question:

1) What is that green thing?

2) Why is there a spaceship?

the rest is alright, i have to say.

1. The green thing is a ball of high voltage electrothermal energy (Plasma) it is a custom scenery object. The inside of it will fill with electricity because it is animated

2. The ride is a 1950s wooden coaster themed to the space-age and the future.

I mean before he was nice on the forums and sucked at the parkmaking. Now he is mean on the forums and hasn't really improved.

Most (wooden) coasters that follow the terrian use nature itself as a theme. I think you did a good job with the landscaping. You could try making the coaster a shade of brown and maybe that would make it feel a little more natural. I am not going to tell you to get rid of the plasma ball or spaceship because I can see what your going after.

Jag, look at actual Schemcks and then get back to me.
-JDP