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Nokia is that from the park from awhile ago
Are you still working on that, if so I have some time for it now. I realize I didn't do a lot but I'd like to at least get a chance to redo what I did because it was kind of all shit

I think a fucking lot of jagged rocks would look AMAZING in this screen!

Finish and submit this for Spotlight NOW!

All I did was try to help the poor guy. Guess I can't even do that now w/o starting a war. I'm ending this thing here, I have PMEd Wolfman, end of discussion here.

i'm guessing you couldn't tell, but i'm pretty sure wolfman was making fun of you.

@ma: it's shit, give up now, thanks, etc

Edited by tracidEdge, 06 October 2009 - 11:12 PM.

It's obviously a little unfinished. I need some help filling it the rest. Any ideas, guys? And don't be mean... I'll quit!


I think I'll name it something creative. Like an animal name or a sound they make. Maybe an animal name with a ferocious sounding adjective attached. Nobody has ever done this before.

Looks a little blocky,
I'd of used a dead tree...
And the grass should be mowed with stripes.

But that's just my opinion.

I'd call it Worm Screamer!
(b'cause worms live in dirt?)

Oh, you quit?
Well, fuck you, asshole!

My apologies to any assholes reading this topic.

Edited by Wolfman, 07 October 2009 - 12:26 AM.

My apologies to any assholes reading this topic.

That wasn't necessary, but my rectal cavity accepts your apology.

I agree with Wolfman, mow the grass. Mown grass = pure class. I often sing that little phrase to myself. But you have a lot of potential.

This topic sucks now. Used to be my favorite

^yeah it turned from dump place to dumb place.

But I think the topic will repair itself soon when somebody's posting screens again

"MFG"

Wow, you guys are so mature. Make fun of people online because they aren't as "good" as you. This has been become the worst topic now, partly due to me. But the fact that ya'll continued the attacks/sarcasm just completely killed it. Just drop the subject that I built a blocky station, and post some screens that people actually want to see.

Everyone just shut the fuck up. The next post better have a screen in it.

Doing what this topic was intended for:



I know I've kind of already shown this area, but whatever....just trying to get this topic back on topic.

i love you guys sometimes.


NEW LEAF TIME




maybe a little less screens from me from now on

i know yuo guys will all be upset cause you love seeing them

this screen has changed a lot since i took this, since a conversation on AIM loaded me with ideas.

i would apreiciate comments on the structure.

I really hate to say this, but the balcony is really bare right now. Don't take this the wrong way, I'm fixing up my monorail station, so nobody needs to jump on my back just yet.

Dark Horse - I don't like the pipes coming off the top building as they float at some point. if you keep em maybe support them a bit more. Change the water to aqua and make sure the trims are all the same colour. I like the main blue building. Maybe add some turnstiles.

Your also using an excessive ammount of Windows for only three buildings. This is ok if its done right but it sticks out too much here.

Keep going and this will pay off for you.

SSSammy - The main structure itself is interesting but the roof on the right is overhanging too much imo. Foliage is nice and I'm interested to see what that ride is like. The tower on the left is perfect with the right ammount of details and textures. I think you should change the roof colour so it isn't the same as the others giving you some nice variation.

@Dark_Horse: Not bad at all, but a bit too random for my likings. Cohesion and flow is very important in my opinion, and your screen lacks it. The windows on the most left building for example look horrible together!

The tower of the red building looks weird too, the shape doesn't fit in that setting. It's like two different buildings with the same colour scheme.

@SSSammy: That's pretty cool! You're improving very fast! The balcony needs supports, the roof might be too plain and the most right roof has some weird curves.


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Here's some old shit:









Don't know why I'm posting these.

I know why your posting them.

The old Liampie shows just as much skill as your current work. Nice sceens and nice details here and there. Not as much as your new stuff but thats because your REALLY good now.

@comet: nope, new park maybe desgin idk. i haven't really touched the other one since you gave it back to me.

dear god