(Archive) Advertising District / Dump-Place
- 19-April 07
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turbin3 Offline
Robbie, really nice colour choose.
Grabster, you know I really like this restaurant. -
SSSammy Offline
you need to sort out the colours of the grass, it looks malnourished
plus what i said on msn, lovely screen. -
Comet Offline
I think you should put some flowers or a hedge fence next to the tables to make it somewhat appealing to sit there -
Hepta Offline
I think the color schemes of the buildings look odd. each of the buildings by themselves though are excellent -
SSSammy Offline
thats VERY pretty indeed.
id make the walls thinner on the fountain though, or otherwise make it a different shape -
Liampie Offline
I'd like to add to Hepta and SSSammy's comments that the parasols at the bottom of the screen look shitty. -
Faas Offline
Yeah you're right, ignore the bottom please. Thanks everyone for the comments. Don't forget Grabster's screen though. -
Wolfman Offline
@ Grabster:
Not really sure how close to the RR tracks I'd want to be while eating. It's one thing to be a station of some sort. Totally different for use as an open-air bistro.
Lots of grit gets kicked up and the next thing you know, you're chomping down on cinders from the engine or something that looks like paprika, but it's really rust powder or something.
@ Faas:
I like the area. But I'm not all that sure about the color of the monorail track. You can make custom umbrellas for tables from the circular awnings and a 1/4 tile pole. Just a thought. -
Cena Offline
Goddamnit, Faas + Grabster, you are getting so good for the last few months. Really great screens you are showing!
Faas, your monorail is real short to the ground, I would raise 1 or 2 units. -
Comet Offline
That is really good
Less hectic than your usual stuff
Tree should be gray though not white -
RCTNW Offline
Robbie - Very nice.
faas - Nice work and you are off to a nice start. I couple of things I would modify. 1 - I think your monorail track is too low. Yes it clears the path clearance however I would have it 15 feet vice 10 feet above the path. 2 - The awnings on the building on the lower right. Flip flop the red and white on the awning colors for every other awning so the strips are even and consistent. -
K0NG Offline
@faas...where you have the balcony? Nothing but windows so, no access to the balcony itself. Maybe add one or two doors or some kind of access up there and it'll be sweet. Maybe like a stairway in the middle or something. Plus, it would break up the monotony of all the same window/flowerboxes in a row.
And, Mutt-Pa....."spell monkey"? You can do better than that, right? Christ...I hope you can. Otherwise you should maybe just double your dose of Geritol, hit the recliner, watch Johnny Carson reruns and shut the fuck up.Edited by K0NG, 27 September 2009 - 10:07 PM.
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