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The Diveloop looks like it's forced to be on the parking. I think it only works when a bigger part of the coaster is on the parking.

Should I just take out that chunk of parking lot?

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well i ment to put this one in with the other one too, well here it is anyways.

Beautiful atmosphere in that screen! Very nostalgic and scenario-like.

Should I just take out that chunk of parking lot?

Yes.

no, i say keep the concrete but remove the parking lot lines. that will make it more realistic. i think the fence you added works perfectly btw.

panther, the parking should reorganized, as it doesn't meet up in places. there's double spots?

A cookie for whoever guesses why this layout is awesome! Think outside the box, sort of.

Robocoaster?

To the parking lot-- don't remove it. What you should do it make it more regular. I see you already did that with the spaces. What you need to do now is get rid of the part that sticks into the land more. The rest of your parking lot is regular, except for that part. You can tell that you built the coaster, that section of parking, and then added the rest of it from there. So what you should do, is make the whole edge of the lot straight with only one or two variants (just to make it more interesting if you want). You want it to look like the lot came first. Leave the lines-- SFMM and SFDK did.

See here:
http://rcdb.com/617.htm?p=4209
http://rcdb.com/2169.htm?p=10695

Unfinished. Comments/Criticism?

EDIT:: I'm considering taking out the building in the middle. I find it pretty ugly.

Edited by ahank, 13 September 2009 - 11:04 AM.

@Cocoa- is it a shoestring coaster?.. from what I can see.. it looks like it might be... the first drop could have the cars split in two.. I dunno.

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Cocoa, I'd like to know what the coaster is, but I have know clue.

ahank, I really like the start of that! Very unfinished to comment more on it though, lol.

Turbin3. You know what I think of the whole park.

GIB, ftw.

Everything looks great except for the blue supports in the back.

I hope for that GIB you used the large vertical and large cobra roll from the inverted coaster

I think the footers would look better gray
Good screen though, and take inVersed advice if you still can

Great screen, Turbine!

ahh, Steve, your bridges are always so pretty.

Steve, the atmosphere in that screen is wonderful