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@gir: It doesn't flow well at all. They stop deuling about at the turnaround. But I think with a bit of tweeking, it would be an interesting ride to see in a park. The concept does work, though. For some reason or another I thought it wouldn't.

Also, I swear to God that's the track colors they gave me when I built it. I altered the train colors only, to match the track. You've got to believe me on that one. So does anyone else see a Sprite themed coaster? Isn't that just an awesome coincidence? There wasn't meant to be a theme yet, but I think it's funny how it turned out.

nice, use the other staris though

Great coaster interaction ramsam! I can really feel the atmosphere in that screen, with the logflume and the mine train coaster back there in the trees.

I could be completely wrong, but I think even Cedar Fair uses themed garbage cans, such as barrels, in the back section of Cedar Point by Millennium Force, so maybe you could use those here. Again, I could be wrong.
That is an amazing screen though, you've come so far since joining this site.

hmm, i actually like those stairs.
i wouldn't change them if i were you.

great screen though.
its not super super detailed, which in this case is actually a good thing:]

nice work man

Wow RamSam. You are currently one of my favorite builders here.

I agree with Comet on the barrels, and I personally think maybe some planters/foliage wouldn't hurt in front of the buildings if done right.

Still very impressive, RamSam12!

^Yeah, planters would be brilliant out in front of the porch of the Sugar Shack.

RamSam - Don't change the stairs, but do change the dustbins. They don't fit in at all. Plus some more general detail would be nice, specifically roof-wise, perhaps a chimney or two.

Spartan- I was going for a Top Gun type of a ride. Without becoming a recreation. But thanks for the support!

Ramsam- That screen looks amazing! Yet I think there is too much brown.

Splitvision- Not much to comment on, but it looks cool!

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Any ideas to help it?

i'm not great at coaster design, but in my opinion, it looks pretty rough in some spots.
especially in that first turn during the drop, it looks pretty jerky.

but as for the rest, maybe try to smooth it out a bit with some larger banked turns?
lol sorry i cant help too much.

however, i think the overall layout looks nice.

Not sure your going for realism with this but if you are i think you should get rid of the flat steep section of the first drop and have it transition directly from the steep turn into the the banked turn. Overall the layout seems a bit long for a flying coaster IMO and i think it would work better if your shortened it and went right into the pretzel loop after the first drop (I know its not necessary since Tatsu does not go straight into the pretzel loop but with this compact layout it seems more realistic to me)

Splitvision: I love that screen! Is it themed to Greece?

The transfertrack doesn't fit.

^ Instead of making stupid reactions first, you could have thinked about it.

This is the dump-place, where people show unfinished screens. That is why this isn't finished so that includes the transfer is not correct yet. It is just an idea.

About Jusmith his screen, I think it is too crammed , make it bigger etc. Supporting this will be a hell

I don't think this layout will look good from any angle... It's too chaotic.

I wanted to experiment with landblocks, this is the result!: a queue of an attraction!

Very scenic landscape in the second screen, I really like that!