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You seem unsure of what to call your buildings.

I don't like the purple in the second or third screens, but I like the other screens.

^That is nice Drew, I like that. But I suggest adding more color and a bit more texture to the station though.
-JDP

Edited by JDP, 18 July 2007 - 06:11 PM.

That turn going into the station looks AWESOME. Great shapes going on with the architecture, too, although I'd like to see the station maybe 1 or 2 units higher? Especially where the ride entrance is. Still, I love Drew.

A2nxpimp needs more colors.
woodie looks great. station not so much.

Same as Steve. Love the turn through the station; it looks awesome. As for the station itself... I like it where it is but I suppose the aforementioned comments wouldn't hurt it.

Wow, that's very nice. Reminds me a lot of JKay when he was building. The architecture in the first picture looks a bit forced, however, and your foliage needs work. Check out stuff by J K or sloB for foliage stuff. But other than that it looks really good.

I think what zodiac is trying to say is that you should copy the spotlights here so your style becomes completely generic.

^No, that's not what I said at all. I like this person's style but there's just too much quarter tile foliage (Oh, wait. Guess I should've worded it better before). Try adding some trees. J K and sloB are good examples, but he doesn't have to copy them.

Not my job is too bad again.

The architecture in the first picture looks a bit forced

What do you mean ?

your foliage needs work

not only. ^^

Try adding some trees

not anywhere. Moreover, much things stay incompletes. Actually, there are a bit of work , on all plans. ( structure, terrain, etc ... )

Sorry for my english, i hope it will be understanding.

new teaser!
my switzerland area.

u can see on the pic a shop which calls "ricola", the famous bonbons in switzerland.

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I love this ricola building and the overall of the screen.

The track over the path seems a bit too much in this screen, or may be the colour does not fit (the red especially),

The snow-covered trees give a nice feeling to it, but they seem a bit odd/on their own, as hardly anything else is with snow...so may be some more patches of snow here and there on ground, or a fence with snow, to make it more believable?

Emergo

That is quite an interesting picture you have there, sir. I'm not sure whether I like it or not...

For one, it could be finished, and for two, don't take screens when it's raining. Thanks!

No, there are a mixture of structure, i need to see reactions forum. And why i must not do screens when it rains ?

Edited by Sûre, 20 July 2007 - 06:04 AM.

Lol! You had such a enourmous building and you still couldt hide those shops

^^When it rains, everything gets distorted and doesn't look as good.

That's a very interesting structure. It's pretty cool actually.

click here.

^Looks great, however the foliage does not flow the way it looks like it should... it's almost there just not quite. And the empty grass is overused.

Best LL screen I've seen for a while.