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  • Maverix%s's Photo
    From my new design...

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  • MF72 %s's Photo
    Too much blue I think.
  • Todd Lee%s's Photo
    Maybe change the fence color to ease up on the blue a bit. The rest looks awesome!
  • spartan%s's Photo

    Too much blue I think.

  • G Force%s's Photo
    There both un finnished.
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  • spartan%s's Photo
    could use some landscape variation and some foliage.

    BTW I like your KNEX coasters. awesome idea making an inverted one.
  • nin%s's Photo

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  • LDW%s's Photo
    I like your screen nin but I think te drop tower needs some more fencing around it and the building on the right looks like 3 storeys when it is compared with the controls building. Good work! :)
  • Katapultable%s's Photo
    Nin, stop teasing us, already! :p
    Start a topic for it, 'cause it's absolutely gorgeous!
  • inVersed%s's Photo
    nin, can you hack it so there is no entrance building, then this would be perfect. This park is becoming one of my favorite parks in progress... how many coasters do you plan on having?
  • MF72 %s's Photo
    Love it nin, especially the overgrown foliage near the back.
  • nin%s's Photo

    ...the building on the right looks like 3 storeys when it is compared with the controls building. Good work! :)


    Are you sure it's not because of the trashcan to the side of it? The queue building is already meant to be the tallest building, but not 3x the size of the others.
    Also, thanks everyone and inVersed ~8.
  • posix%s's Photo
    nin, can you just finish something, please ?!

    seriously, all your screens make me drool over my keyboard ... yet i never see a submission email of yours in our inbox. it's cruel.
  • BelgianGuy%s's Photo
    How much I want to see a fully realised nin park!!!!
    Please finish something in the near future

    anyhow I've got some stuff I worked on as of lately so please tell me how I can improve
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    NOTE: still very unfinished

    Edited by BelgianGuy, 15 July 2009 - 04:47 PM.

  • MF72 %s's Photo
    I think the foliage could use work.
  • Comet%s's Photo
    There's not much but that's actually really really nice.
    Love the colors, supports, layout, and foliage especially.

    Now you just need to work on elevation change and adding character to it.
  • Maverix%s's Photo
    Like Comet said, it nice but it's nothing special. Some land elevation would do that screen wonders.
  • JJ%s's Photo
    It's a beautiful coaster and foliage but your lack of landscaping really ruins it.
  • Casimir%s's Photo
    The only thing (apart from the landscaping) is that some supports aren't actually connected to the coaster itself.
    You might wanna fix that ^^
  • BelgianGuy%s's Photo
    They are actually from another point of view, if I would make it otherwise it would look 2stories too low from another angle

    and the landscaping wasn't even started yet because I've only worked on it for like an hour or so, what you guys suggest small hills or dramatic landscaping witha waterfall and such?

    Edited by BelgianGuy, 16 July 2009 - 01:32 AM.

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