(Archive) Advertising District / Dump-Place
- 19-April 07
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SSSammy Offline
Cena: frakinf AWESOME!
Goliath: i would hae it more gradual, like step, step, step, thats to jaggedy. imo. -
SSSammy Offline
it certainly is simple, but is it effective?
nearly.
ill point out a couple of things that could be improved.
the area around the path in the top left corner is very boring indeed. i never knew
bushes and muddy grass grew at right angles?
granted, you could say that the gardener did it, but im not sure thats the effect your going for
id try and make the path and the foliag flow more naturally into eachother. curvy lines in nature you see . afew bushes extending out to the path.
the right side looks interesing.
the woody certainly looks nice, i think we have seen most of the layout before.
the only thing i can say is try and make them supports abit more fluid
otherwise, pretty screen mozilla
this si just my oppinion, others may dissagree entirely -
Brent Offline
I'd take out that trashcan on the right side of the screen... Nobody wants to be standing on a deck that small with a trashcan so close. At least, I wouldn't. Coaster looks pretty cool from what can be seen there... looks like a good custom support job so far. -
Midnight Aurora Offline
I disagree with Sammy entirely. That's not jagged at all, at least not comapered to the old LL stuff... It's looks like a hill, not a mountain. Go a little crazy with it.Realistic? Or does it just look stupid?
Its a muntain btw
Cooments? -
Goliath123 Offline
Well thanks guys, i thought it looks more like a hill, what im trying to achieve is like a small miuntain with like a platform at the top, kinda like The screen SF shower of the switzerland section in EPWS.
Mozilla reminds me of something, but cant remeber what, it looks great though! Good to see you using CS. -
RamSam12 Offline
This looks just like the Samurai Summit sign over the path up the hill to Ninja at SFMM! Nice work.
Here's one from Six Flags Wyoming. Not much, but hey, it's the thread for random crap like this.
I will have an update on this once I finish the ride and the surrounding area. -
In:Cities Offline
this is from a random little mini park i've made.
its not very good, its unfinished:[ and has absolutely no definate themes lol.
its just randomness:]
anddd this is a design i was working on three years ago, but never finished.
after looking back at it today, i feel super inspired to work on this and complete it:D
its not much yet, but its a good layout, and i think if i add some more creativity and effort into it, it could turn out pretty decent:]
so as of now, i think i'll put my little venice harbour thing on hold, and complete this, hoping that this will give me some more inspiration -
Nokia Offline
@egg: the layout too short.
@belgian guy: it looks to boring right now
@in:cities: it looks pretty good, for some reason it reminds me of levi's work, which is always good -
In:Cities Offline
gracias:]
i'm completing the design in the second screen at this moment actually:D
should be finished in several days i hope -
SSSammy Offline
@egg: the layout too short.
@belgian guy: it looks to boring right now
i wanted to say that but i didnt want to sound mean
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