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I think it's actually pretty good.

this has too much 1/4 tile- textures repeating over and over, which makes it look strange and not flowing.

I think it's actually pretty good.

I wasnt saying it was really bad, I was just telling him that it was better when he showed me a more unfinished version of this screen.

other than all the brown paths that looks great!

unfinnished.
feedback apreiciated

finish the screen first. There's almost nothing to comment on.
At the moment its just a little hill with stairs leading up to a random picnic area, random white deco pieces, and small buildings that have no purpose what so ever.

well its useful to know wether or not ive wasted my time placing a little hill with stairs leading up to a random picnic area, random white deco pieces, and small buildingsthat have no perpose whatsoever, and wether or not i should carry on

Edited by SSSammy, 14 April 2009 - 02:43 PM.

It's okay, but when can we ever see a finished screen of something? Nothing you have is ever completed...

Please, next time, try to finish something before you post a screen, or do what I do and crop your screen so it looks finshed

sounds like you're talking about yourself.

I think sometimes people forget this is just a dump place. Unfinished screens are meant to belong here, and by posting an unfinished screen it helps to give ideas on how to improve whats there before going on to finish it.

People dont have to bitch about it.

^I know. I was just wondering if SSSammy would post something finished soon. I like his work, and I really want to see something more than a layout or something barely themed.

BTW, how's that gokart park going? I wanna see more screens.

What the hell is this supposed to be?^^

aha thanks robbie that means alot from one of my favourite parkmakers c:
CheeVa, its kinda a craggy kinda rock youd find on a coastline, giving a good vantage point. (hence the pay+usetelemascope)

thanks for all the feedback guys.
ill post anotherscreen once ive done abit more of it.
i think what annoyed Louis was the colours of the shop, which are now changed.
thanks.

The shop colours? They were fine.

I explained it was the annoying art deco pieces on the landscape, it should be landscaped more, it's almost as if you used that as an excuse to not landscape.

However after viewing that park of yours today, this is miles better well done bud!

HGAHAHAHAHAA
ive improved alot havnt i
hahahaha

slightly unfinshed,
its suposed to be a dark ride



yay or nay?

Yay

Yay too. I like the vibe coming from it.

Would be Even cooler with a portion of the ride coming out of the house and going into it again (over the queue and visible from the path) with a sign and the Ride's name on it.

Pretty walls. All I'd say is add bushes or some vines to make it more "worn-down", if that is your intention.

Would be Even cooler with a portion of the ride coming out of the house and going into it again (over the queue and visible from the path) with a sign and the Ride's name on it.

My thought exactly. Looks really good so far though Nok.