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  • Goliath123%s's Photo
    Be careful you don't get strangled.....

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    Edited by Goliath123, 05 April 2009 - 12:41 AM.

  • Katapultable%s's Photo
    Liampie, I got to be honest with you: I underestemated you. It looks fantastic what you've got there.

    Goliath, much better than your older work. You've really improved. I loved the screen with the B&M sit-down as well.
  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Liampie, I got to be honest with you: I underestemated you. It looks fantastic what you've got there.


    If you think that is my best, you still underestimate me! ;) Thanks anyway.
  • J K%s's Photo
    Video_kid - That has a really nice clean feel to it. I like it. I think the yellow on the roof is a bit much but you could maybe have the station blue and purple then the que line could be yellow. The brightest colour is still there but just in a smaller accent compared to the other two. Anyway I like the shapes and structure of the entrance. It's quite different and thats good.
  • chapelz%s's Photo
    video_kid might want to make the ceiling a little higher it seems awfully heavy right now and i have feeling that could be fixed by raising it a bit but, besides that it looks good.
  • tracidEdge%s's Photo

    Be careful you don't get strangled.....

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    Absolutely boring. Big boxy brown buildings, almost nothing but full tile trees (which to be honest could probably be pulled off well, but isn't here), and bland landscaping. If you work on those things you'll improve a whole lot.

    Honestly an accent color would probably do this screen wonders.
  • Micool%s's Photo
    hey Liampie that is some beautiful work you got there. and I love the yellow flowers, myself.
  • Goliath123%s's Photo

    Absolutely boring. Big boxy brown buildings, almost nothing but full tile trees (which to be honest could probably be pulled off well, but isn't here), and bland landscaping. If you work on those things you'll improve a whole lot.

    Honestly an accent color would probably do this screen wonders.


    Well to me how to improve on it then, dont just tell me it can be improved, like how do imake the station better? How do i pull of full tile trees better?

    Just curious you know.
  • turbin3%s's Photo
    Your station looks interesting, Video...

    Liampie, really nice layout of the coaster.
    Moreover the theming looks fine :)

    Something I started yesterday:
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    Hope you like it :)

    Yannik
  • SSSammy%s's Photo
    yannik, i really like that screen.
  • Nokia%s's Photo
    someones improving.
    i really like, but for gate thing maybe make it black,
  • BelgianGuy%s's Photo
    Here's a little something I've been working on
    The coaster is called Hatun Apruratin(wich is the same as a general in the Inca Culture) and is themed to the Inca civilisation and the South American jungles

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    Please tell me what you think


    -Stijn-
  • CheeVa%s's Photo
    Track Color is nice, but the fence in gold is quite ugly. I like the supports, too, but nevertheless the red isn't that nice. I think there is too much supporting, but it's ok...

    Greets CheeVa
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    looks nice!
  • posix%s's Photo
    interesting paths. i think a lot could be done with them.
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    I dislike the paths, however it fits in this screen.

    The red on the green supports isnt great but the rest of the colours are nice.
  • Xcoaster%s's Photo
    Looks good so far. The foliage is interesting. I'm not sure I care for those green bushy trees (from WW, I think).
  • tracidEdge%s's Photo

    Well to me how to improve on it then, dont just tell me it can be improved, like how do imake the station better? How do i pull of full tile trees better?

    Just curious you know.

    You know, you're not really going to get anywhere if you need someone to hold your hand the whole time.

    Big boxy brown buildings: big buildings aren't necessarily bad, but when they're a square and brown, it's boring. Add some variation to your buildings in both shape and color. Add some detail to it, spice it up.

    Full tile trees: quarter tile foliage is a great way to help spice up an area. I see that you've already got some by the water, but if you add some bushes mixed in with the trees it will help it a whole lot. Don't just throw them in haphazardly, though. That won't do anything.

    Bland landscaping: I don't know, it's flat and boring. Look at some spotlights and see how they incorporate landscaping into their parks. It's really hard to explain it.
  • SSSammy%s's Photo
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    Something i was mucking about with.
    i like little things like this.
    feedback apreiciated
  • Timothy Cross%s's Photo
    i know jackshit about coasters but the layout don't look that appealing to me. Sorry, not qualified to give any pointers or advice. This new way of showing screens is really cool though. Thumbs up for that.

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