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From a new park I'm working on.

Look quite nice. Nice path interaction, I like the little tunnels under the bridge.

Very nice. It does look like you are missing a footer though in the bottom right of the cobra roll.

Love the colors

James

Absolutely beautiful. Love the colors... the bridge over the entrance/exit of the Cobra Roll. And the park entrance/ticket selling things (name's escaping me right now) also looks rather nice. Can't wait to see more.

that's very good. the tunnel entrances/exits seem a little thick, though, but i'm just getting picky. it's great.

The one real thing that needs work is the foliage, it's all the same. Other than that, it's very nice. You've improved.

Other then what's been said I'd change the fence around the path.
It's really pretty good though, well done.

Attempt at a diner:



Still not that good at buildings and what not, so please don't bomb it with complaints.

Edited by Alpengeistfan1, 01 April 2009 - 05:47 PM.

not bad. the roof could use some simplification - maybe don't have overhangs on every single window? It might look better with a peaked roof.

A different colored roof is really my only advice.

Maverix if you would have 8 cars on that coaster, you would be set. Keep it up.
-JDP

Wow, I wasn't expecting so many great comments from so many great builders. Thanks a lot.

But let me just make sure I know the little things I need to fix.

-Foliage
-Path Fence
-Footer on bottom left of CR
-8 Cars for the coaster

I'll go back and fix those things up as so as I can. I should hopefully have another screen ready in a few days too.

Yeah, you've definately improved. The entrance booths look a little familiar , but the colors are great. I'm not a huge fan of the tunnels under the bridge, but i think they'd look better if you make the whole bridge in that style. Also, I don't like the different colored flanges on the supports. Other than that, it looks awesome. I look forward to seeing what you can do...

Maverick that reminds of the coaster that Geewhzz and disneylhand did a wile back.

^Yeah I know it looks like El Encierro, but all my inspiration for the coaster came from Silver Bullet.

Robbie: For making the bridge the same stile as the tunnels i take it you mean just fill out the empty space underneath. Just want to be sure. And thanks.

maveric, that is godly.

foliage needs work though

but otherwise

godly.

Maverick: Yeah, that's what I meant...

kinda finshed, kinda not finshed.

OH MY JESUS FLOATING CROOS BEAMS
the only bit i dont like so much is the building in the centre.

pleasant. while it works well enough here i don't think an entire park of buildings like that will look very good.