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^This looks so nice! Very atmospheric. I really like your work Robbie!
One suggestion though: You can avoid the glitches of the fountain bordering using a path object instead of normal path.

Keep it up!

"MFG"

I like it, except for the small building at the bottom of the screen. That one is actually very bad.

lol, new mexico and the orient area in your bush gardens look quite similiar imo.
but i still love it!

Oh my God... You're doing Six Flags now? Have you even finished Busch Gardens Asia?

That's an awesome little screen! I love the idea of having chilis hanging from the walls.
You should do as 5Dave suggested - using path blocks will solve all your glitching troubles.

I tried to improve myself and that is the result:

How you can read - the theme will be "Planet of the Apes"...

Hope you like it!

Oh, please ignore the first screen, i've a newer one for you:


Please give me some feedback.

Edited by Yannik, 17 January 2009 - 10:46 AM.

id better comment on th one before me before i post any screens....
that looks ace, i didnt like the first screen, but the 2nd one is growing on meh. the only critisism i have is that orange thing as the eave or whatever its called.

Not really feeling the PotA theme, and this looks a little .. amateur for you? That could be from the theme though, can't really say much.

id better comment on th one before me before i post any screens....
that looks ace, i didnt like the first screen, but the 2nd one is growing on meh. the only critisism i have is that orange thing as the eave or whatever its called.

Oh sorry, i forget it... :S

Not really feeling the PotA theme, and this looks a little .. amateur for you? That could be from the theme though, can't really say much.

amatuer for me? What do you mean?



@robbie: It looks so great, i have no dislikes.

not really getting the planet of the apes feal here.
but i can see your improving so thats good.
as for the screens in general i dont really like the way you did the land blocks.
but i think the colors for the coaster are good.

id better comment on th one before me before i post any screens....

You can post another screen right after someone else. Pudding didn't know what he was saying. You don't have to wait a few comments.

Anyway, I kinda like where it's going although it could use a few touch ups.

I really like that, Yannik, although I didn't at first. It looks strangely realistic if a bit over the top.

See the way the train drops out of the station and curls under itself? I fucking love that. Simple but effective.


I'm interested to see what else you do to follow the PoTA theme.

Yannik, there's to much ground on the station and TT, maybe loosen it up a bit.

screen from my no custom scenery park using the SFOH Bench thing.
feel free to desomate.

I really like that, Yannik, although I didn't at first. It looks strangely realistic if a bit over the top.

See the way the train drops out of the station and curls under itself? I fucking love that. Simple but effective.


I'm interested to see what else you do to follow the PoTA theme.

Wanna know it?

With some monkey's, who conquered the planet:


And some people in a cage:

screen from my no custom scenery park using the SFOH Bench thing.
feel free to desomate.

Not sure about the paths and the foliage.
There's nothing in this screen, where you could say: Wooow, this is really cool!
btw: why there's a flying sign? haha

it most certainly is.

the "maaan cage" be ace

Edited by SSSammy, 17 January 2009 - 03:36 PM.

Force Square...
Could be a Star Wars - thing with a sign held up by the force.
Or it could just be sloppy theming xD

N-Trance (villains from Crash Bandicoot- super awesome)

slightly improved funkyness. another building. =D
i dunno whats up with me this evening.
i dont expect you to adore them. im hopeless with foliage and i guess im sort of asking for help.
C :

@Yannik: That cage is killer. And although I can't say much in regards to the PotA theme, I must say that it does look good.

Le Tonnerre

Added some of the "Fachwerk" (right?) that Mifune mentioned, and some flags. I personally think it makes the buildings stand out more. Which, I assume, is good. Nothing else has changed in this screen, except for the Cafe sign. And I need to raise the flower boxes up.

EDIT: Sorry about the rain.

^i think it adds to the atmosphere.
awesome.
super awesome.