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  • Fr3ak%s's Photo
    Thanks@ Metropole
    And JJ, you're right. It only looks on that picture a little bit out of place. But in the hole thing is everything allright.
  • Faceman%s's Photo
    You definitively need some plants under that tree.
  • Wicksteed%s's Photo
    ^i dont think so.
    btw, why did you colour the top of the lamps yellow, and the bottom black? its ok but I would have expected it the other way round.
  • Fr3ak%s's Photo
    Faceman: I was thinking about that so long! But I've decided to do it without plants, cause it's a parking place and they won't exist very long.
    Wicksteed: It's yellow on the top cause it fits to the holding things of the lamps and it's black, cause this should be some plastics. In reality you don't see the real 'lamps' form that perspective, so it's not important which colour those things have.

    Edited by Fr3ak, 10 June 2007 - 12:00 PM.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    That cobra roll could use a lot of work.


    @mifune- yes, work on cobra roll supports. castle entrance + walls look god though.

    @pineapple- work on supports, and don't keep repeating the tower forms. layout looks good so far.
    @fr3ak- nice lights. not nice tree.
    @~CF~ - one "t" in "but"
    @ivo- i like. maybe too much quarter-tile frivolity, though.
  • Metropole%s's Photo

    Thanks@ Metropole
    And JJ, you're right. It only looks on that picture a little bit out of place. But in the hole thing is everything allright.


    Yeah, I did gather that, but I think, with the look you are going for, you should get rid of the trees and have it all carpark. I think the lights break it up enough and make it interesting.
  • Faceman%s's Photo
    African restaurant...not much to say about it...
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    Edited by Faceman, 13 June 2007 - 12:32 PM.

  • z3r0-G%s's Photo
    ^Looks great. The pathing is perfect, and the archy and attention to detail is outstanding. Very nice. Here's something I've been working on for the past 2 days.

    Park Entrance (Screen is on the bigger side, so link..)

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    ^Fountain in the entrance plaza. It might turn out to be a Busch Gardens park but I'm not sure yet. Other sign is classified.

    I guess its alright for someone who hasnt touched the game for months.

    Edited by z3r0-G, 13 June 2007 - 01:12 PM.

  • ivo%s's Photo
    Faceman: You need an pole at the right side. I like the tower and the balcon in the middle very much
    z3r0-G: The first screen need some more detail. The houses on the left side need some detail. A other roofe may help is some. The second screen is very nice but i don not like the crazy pathing.
  • Carl%s's Photo
    This is from one of my other park projects besides TRAP:

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  • lucas92%s's Photo
    Faceman@ Freaking awesome! Your stuff looks like X250 work, and it's high quality.
    Comet@ What's with classified sign? Otherwhise, nice path layout...
  • Ling%s's Photo
    @Faceman: that looks amazing, all the detail, level changes, complexity... Awesome.

    @z3r0-G: looks good; the real buildings look sorta blocky, but everything else looks pretty good.

    @ride_exchanger: VERY classy. Great job on that (station, ride, stats, everything)
  • zodiac%s's Photo
    Psst.

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    I'm not sure I should be giving this much up... but I need feedback.

    EDIT: The park is called "Five Shades of Black", so there's not much color, but that's what I was going for.

    Edited by zodiac, 13 June 2007 - 06:42 PM.

  • Comet%s's Photo
    Putting aside the fact there's only two colors, it looks very good.
    Although the entrance and exit buildings stick out a bit much.
  • Carl%s's Photo
    I assume you are going to add more colors, trim pieces (to the roofs mainly), and hide the entrances/exits, right, zodiac? You do that and its a good screen, er, screens :D

    Edited by ride_exchanger, 13 June 2007 - 09:54 PM.

  • Ling%s's Photo
    Yeah, try to hide the entrance/exit, add more color if you can (I see some yellow in the flowers... maybe use that?), and definitely add trim, deco, rails, whatever to the roofs. Also, IMO the flat pieces on top of the roofs should be gray, not white.
  • Milo%s's Photo
    lol Somehow I think you guys missed the point of this project. He named it "Five Shades of Black" so he's obviously going to only use black, white, and shades of gray. I like this idea and I think I've only seen it a couple times before in rct... Pleasantville and some Beatles themed park by Chesire or someone maybe? Anyway I like the concept but it obviously has its risks. I think your buildings need to have more details to be more visually interesting. Since there is a lack of color the architecture forms are going to be doing all the work and right now they lack a little imo. I agree that the entrance and exit buildings need to be covered (A little tip: maybe incorporate a gray glass wall that covers the entrance building on the coaster... and maybe the park, so the text on it is turned a grayish color as well.) As far as the foliage goes... if you're going to do this then ditch the yellow in the flowers. This is a bold move since it really eliminates any color at all which could hurt it but I would almost like to see black and white flowers and maybe even black and white trees since there are colorable versions out now. That would be interesting to try out at least and could yield good results imo. Keep going on this though, it's nice so far.

    @r_e- that's a pretty nice coaster but some straight track would have helped it I think. It's just a little too compact for my tastes.

    @z3ro g- nice...um... fountain. Show more please =P.

    @Faceman- nice building but a little boring color wise and it all sort of blends together. I guess it fits the theme though.
  • tracidEdge%s's Photo
    hey zodiac, way to be way late. darkjanus already started a park that was 100% black and white (to my knowledge). but that was like a few years ago.
  • Turtle%s's Photo
    I still don't know why people make parks that are completely monotone. It just doesn't look very good.
  • lucas92%s's Photo
    Hum, maybe you could download Ja227 black and white palette so all the park (including foliage, landscape) would be in grey tones, and it wouldn't look boring since there would be a lot of grey tones.

    You can get it from Rctrevalutions. Parkitect section.

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