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I don't like the cobra roll much, but the rest is real nice.

Reminds me a little bit in Faceman's Duelling Dragons.
But it looks nice

Edited by Fr3ak, 08 June 2007 - 02:01 AM.

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Caledor, occupied by the High Elves, situated in the hill-side. Access to Caledor through gateways only.

what do you think of it?

Woah, a lot to take in.

ivo- Foliage needs a bit of work, but I know personally it's hard to theme sand areas with trees. Maybe try some cactus or something.

Pineapple- Liking the colors, and the supports were pulled off nicely, but they look a bit flimsy. The landscaping is a bit boring, try to spruce it up a bit. Same with the building.

Mifune- Nice, taking the FK style of building are we? I agree with geewhzz, the supports are a bit weird on that cobra roll, but the rest is hot.

Oh, and speaking of geewhzz, liking what's in your sig.

@Pineapple: Looks pretty good... sort of empty though...

@ivo: The screen has nice architecture, but the foliage just isn't doing it for me. Looks like a fun ride though.

@Pine, I think you need to stroll over to rcdb.com and pick up some pointers on supports.

^ Whatever that is in your sig Gee,


*drools* The colours are beautiful.

nice sig gw.
-JDP

ivo: your screen's very nice, creative.

Pineapple: Your coaster looks too unsupported, and I don't like how the landscape makes a line (just strange)...

Geewhzz: Nice sig, foliage's what best in it.

Yeah nice sig, although it's hard to read the text at the bottom...

Took me a while to get the timing but... [Unfinished]

It's a nice beginning, butt to many towers, butt that track tru the towers is nice

the supports need serious work. some of them clip the track, and im not sure what's up with the ones that hang over the track.

The one's that clip the track are the best I can do. Those are the only ones that do.

Took me a while to get the timing but...

If it took you a while to get the timing right, then why didn't you show a screen including the trains? I would have liked that. ANyway, this looks good, though unfinished, and I agree that the supports need work. I realize its hard to get them to lineup, but alot of other parkmakers have dones it successfully, and been rewarded for their hard work, so I suggest you keep working at it.

I love it, my only suggestion is get the footers off the path.
I think it would look much more clean if they were.

Don't see the problems with the supports in this particular screen though.

Yep, great, but don't put the supports on the path.

Something from a new, at the moment unknown project

It looks really good, but I think the tree looks kinda out of place here.

^ I think there's a tree every few or so parking place so it won't look so out of place.