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A few too many wall textures on one structure for my likings. Aside from that, great screen zodiac.

Just some testing, I want just your opinion.

lower the umbrellas please.

the lamppost on the 3rd screen looks out of proportion

those umbrellas need tables underneath.

Remy: It's blocky. Very, very blocky.

Ditch the detail for now, work on your form first. Once you've got that down, your architecture will be ten times better.

-ACE

Chapelz, nice first screen. Can't say the same for the second though. It seems to be missing something.

Zodiac, I didn't know you tinkered with LL. I'd say stick with the wood textures, and change the color of the cars on the invert. They look like turds. Literaly.

i really like that, Remy
but there needs to be benches and lamps

New entrance building (ticketcontrol) because the previous one was ugly, hope this one is better :G.

I have changed it a little bit

The park you want to build must be huge.

but i like it.

I <3 those ticket booths.

ehhh.

I like the ticket booths but that entrance building is a bit too big. The way it looks just doesn't work and doesn't fit to the other things around the entrance.
I also like the mainstreet but please try adding some more colors to it. It's not bad how it looks now but it looks a bit pale.
For example shutters and flowers are always a good way to add more color to something.


Fisch

All your work is the same and has the same boring colors, details and shapes.

Edited by Sulakke, 26 July 2008 - 11:03 AM.

I'm not a huge fan of the actual entrance building, but the ticket booths are great!

Here's just an old screen from about six months ago of a hotel for a park I was making. It's based both on the Hotel Del Coronado and the Claremont Hotel in Berkeley, CA.

You need to add floors! I can see right through parts of it.

there are floors just all the same colors

whats up with thoes beach chairs.