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Memphis Kiddie Park? Only wen there once, but passed it every time I drove to work last year.

Yep. The Little Dipper is a dinky little ride, but this is the best I could do.. rode that thing so many times when I was a toddler.

Clearly unfinished, but I wanted to show something for critique on this before I go out of town for the weekend. Based on the game Mirror's Edge. It will probably be a design that features a large hyper that plays with the rooftops a lot. The unfinished building with the fountain is supposed to be a small mall

The building on the left looks really really good. The plants look terrible, on the other hand.

Here's a Dinn woodie layout...



And my favorite element from the B&M hyper I just built...



Both are in that NCS park I've been posting screens of lately.

-The Woodie layout is pretty good except for the awkward S-bend and the final turn before the break run.

-The Hyper's turn looks a little too sharp for me. Try to smooth it out a little. Otherwise it looks pretty clean, and nice.

-Also, please change the station for the woodie. It's an enormous rectangle. Give it some depth.

Looking forward to seeing your next update, tdub! (Hope all this helped)


Now for my slice of the pie: please ignore the unfinished bits.



-S.C.

The building on the left looks really really good. The plants look terrible, on the other hand.

Do you not like that it's white, or is it the species/distribution that you don't like?

Thanks SC. Here's another quick screen...should I make a topic now?

...yes. I think 5+ screens should equal a topic. Especially since you said you were at 20% with the park in the Park Updates topic. Unless that's a different park, of course.

Latest edition to my unnamed park. I present:



Jackknife!

-S.C.

SO MANY SCREENS

SO LITTLE TIME

The landscaping around the coaster seems pretty weak to me. The patches of ice don't fit with the muddy grass too well here. Layout seems okay except...IT'S ALL RIGHT TURNS!! I don't think that's a good thing

^ If NASCAR can make a living by only driving left all day, I'm sure S.C.'s Jackknife will do just fine by only driving right all day. I do agree with the landscaping bit, though; Bigger clumps of trees would do wonders for the landscape and those patches of ice need fixing. I've always loved those little 4-seater car-style trains on the mini coaster. <3

Another small screen from me:

Redux

I really like the foliage there, and this paired with the last screen you showed has got me really curious as to what the final product will look like.

I added a subway station to my ME project.



Not sure how I'm going to put something above it while still leaving it visible yet.

wowza white and blue

I'm starting to think I might want to include source material with these.

I'm super excited about anything Mirror's Edge themed. Don't be afraid to have a lot more little textural details as I think that will set it apart. That color scheme in the game was fantastic, but it's very hard to pull off looking good in this game. Good luck, though, as I think Mirror's Edge has a ton of potential for this.

Hello! I am a new NEDesigns RCT2 player! This is my first park: A design! Tell what you think I could make better to the roller coaster and I will try my best to put it into the roller coaster!

http://www.nedesigns...96531_thumb.jpg

Ow that design hurts my eyes, when making a layout have it look neat in a sense that doesn't look like some vommit without any details. Try taking inspiration from other layouts here and try to learn from them

Edit: oh and welcome to ne

Helixes 40 feet in the air = no good

By the way, this is my brother. He made an account just a little bit ago.

Even if that helix was close to the ground, than it still wouldn't look good.

The layout, honestly... looks strange.
I don't know what the surroundings will look like, or if the landscape gets adjusted to the ride, but like it is now!!?? Not good.
Look through some designs and learn from those.
This... as it is now, wouldn't reach a 20% score.