(Archive) Advertising District / Dump-Place
- 19-April 07
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Ruben Offline
How can I ever start picking up work again if you keep showing demotivating screens with awesomeness-levels most of us will never reach anyways?
No, but really, it looks lovely. So much detail. -
BelgianGuy Offline
that ending helix looks sweet and tight, but the rest is a little unfinished to say much more -
FK+Coastermind Offline
love the ending helix, not a fan of the position. I just never prefer a coaster messing around beneath itself for too long. Details on the brake run are wonderful though!
FK -
muuuh Offline
robbie, great screen. Those supports are really well done.
Only thing I`m not satisfied with are those colors. Everything looks too grey but probably it`s because of the lack of foliage /trees / landscaping. -
Cocoa Offline
super g, I think the first drop needs to be way bigger. can the train even complete that track? -
Austin55 Offline
Coupon-Why the linked wire fence? It's not pretty, use something prettier!
Rob-your getting kinda goood.
SuperG-I worry about pacing. Looks better though. -
Louis! Offline
Robbie, it's just so sterile and bland, and not in a good way. Even sterile and lack-luster parks have atmosphere, something you portrayed greatly in SFSF but here it's just got nothing.
Nice to see someone else do a Giovonola invert though -
Jaguar Offline
I'm not sure if I like it or not. It is interesting nonetheless but the colors don't look good. I'd make the red a white and change the golden roof to grey. -
chorkiel Offline
Jag, have you thougt about that. You want him to change that colorfull building into a boring colorless building. -
Jaguar Offline
A boring, colorless "moderne" building. I've seen several houses shaped like that entrance (an arrangement of white squares with pitched roofs). People need to learn that there is a difference between boring and minimalist. It'll look much cleaner. -
chorkiel Offline
It's the entrance to a park. The colors are fine, but the shape is the problem.
It doesn't really look like an entrance. -
Mr. Coaster Offline
I agree with the concept you have, Jag, just not the execution. I think maybe change the gold roof to a yellow and the walls to grey. -
Ruben Offline
Wow, you've just shown us that ncso cán be highly creative, renewing, and doesn't have to all look alike. Let's hope it inspires other ncso-ers to search for more creative alternatives, instead of using the easy way out. (sub/mediterranean city, 2x2 and 3x3 buildings etc.)
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